poemranker ::20 most recent comments by DreamMachine and replies

Comments byDreamMachine, the 20 most recent, including replies. Only comments on poems

on The Dawn Of Darkness by Dariana 2 Oct 2002, 5:59 PM
Much better and more flowing this time! ...And man 'o' man don't we all hate Stalkers!!! Awesome poem though( makes me wonder if that did happen to you though and if it did I do apologize for that happening)!!! 10
on Don't Think Of Me by Dariana 2 Oct 2002, 5:55 PM
Man...Talk about being stabbed in the back!( Someone wanna twist that knife in my back around a few more times please? thankyou! )As for the transitions they are a bit sketchy but other then that they are pretty flowing and straight to the point so that makes a heck of alot of sense. Keep it up. Great Write. 9 Again!
on You Can by Dariana 2 Oct 2002, 5:50 PM
I dunno about the befriending your enemy part but if you say so then uhhh...ok. Other then that its a Happy-Go-Lucky poem and I like it alot! 9
on Faded Passion by Dariana 2 Oct 2002, 5:38 PM
Ok now you started it off really good until about the 3rd Stanza then it kinda lost the sense of emotions and jumped into a cold-hearted ocean with the 4th Stanza which seemed too sudden but I still understand what you're getting at where as others may not but i'll let ya go on this one since I felt your pain. 6
on Down Home by <~> 2 Oct 2002, 5:34 PM
A sawn-sided shack? A hillside? :::Starts singing..., " Over the river and through the woods to Grandma's House we go...::: Ok but still needs some work man...I don't like to be left hanging and I felt that it was missing something. 3
replying on Twisted Swords of Love & Hate by DreamMachine 30 Sep 2002, 10:42 AM
I am glad you enjoyed it...
on Elephant To A Man by nonee 28 Sep 2002, 4:03 PM
I take it U like U's? I hope U don't mind my saying so but If U like it then U'll get it and like said above it is indeed an interesting angle...
replying on Twisted Swords of Love & Hate by DreamMachine 28 Sep 2002, 3:58 PM
Thankyou all of you! ( the avg rank of this poem was 5.17 but I had to edit it due to the fact that I discovered a spelling error in it...please revote it if you havent already, thankyou! )
on calendared by cobalt 24 Sep 2002, 3:02 PM
Sounds kinda rpg-ish but still i like the references! nice!
on O Man Away From Me by Limness 20 Sep 2002, 4:46 PM
Time is dealt with on this side of the galaxy but I do recall an interest for some such as yourself that have a nac for weaving thier own webs or should I say blankets of time in your case?
on Meaning by Ojiboch 17 Sep 2002, 5:36 PM
OoooOOOh! Weeeee! " Oh look ma, A rollercoaster ride! ( -Excuse me for a minute while I go hurl now please! ) " I can really feel this one and it really has a lot of ups and downs not to mention a few loop 'de' loops to really throw your mind and heart into a spin!
on Who is it for anyway? by flatliner 16 Sep 2002, 11:11 AM
Wow! I find this one really meaningful cus I was just sucked into it's emotions!