poemranker ::20 most recent comments by -=SeTTle=- (181-200) and replies

Comments by-=SeTTle=-, 181–200 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus 27 Oct 2002, 7:08 PM
This is one of those time ASCII art is needed.
on Free to Not Know Me by jsab78 27 Oct 2002, 7:05 PM
Rhyme very forced. Make it mean something or don't rhyme.
on Gutless by temptalia 27 Oct 2002, 7:04 PM
ha ha love the title. I suppose being gutless you also be anusless.
on Just the Way by w~* ATHENA *~w 27 Oct 2002, 7:03 PM
If you were a boy you'd be so fucking gay. 8
I saw someone who looked exactly like Chris Elliot today but he was selling postcards and knicknacks.
on Untitled by LucidRevelation 27 Oct 2002, 7:01 PM
gsdjkdsl;sdljfkjfsd not bad
on The First Poem by jrtails 27 Oct 2002, 6:57 PM
The purpose of poetry is not even to convey *a* mood, certainly not your fucking mood. You know, this goes to show how clueless most of the poets here are. Now, since the poem is so hilarious I will assume that this is a satire of bad poets and haiku in general. 9
on untitled2 by ThreeFourSix 27 Oct 2002, 6:55 PM
not clever enough to work. Unless one "gets it" as soon as they read it, you can assume you haven't been clear enough. Why not "and when lust is a must / trust turns to dust"? Granted it's a bit of a cliche but it's a silly poem.
on Something in the way by nopal 27 Oct 2002, 6:53 PM
This poem is not total garbage and I even enjoyed it.
on Gaze by AuntyM 27 Oct 2002, 6:52 PM
Crisp - overused, sun does not reflect on glass bevel to make rainbow, it refracts, the soul is not the sort of concrete entity with which strong haiku are built.
on Untitled by greym0on 27 Oct 2002, 6:50 PM
Totally excellent. Not justreadable but very interesting - I don't think I've ever read anything with much in common with this poem. Unusual sentiment.
on Nothin lasts by Mutant_X 27 Oct 2002, 6:48 PM
Sincerity alone is almost never enough for a poem to go on - this is an exception. Excellent work, try expanding the range of subject matters which you right about - don't just write about what you most strongly feel.
on Society's Sharades by New Life Drug 27 Oct 2002, 6:45 PM
IT'S MY LIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIFE AND IT'S NOW OR NEVER - I DON'T WANNA *LIVE* FOR-EVER - I JUST WANNA LIVE WHILE I'M ALIVE.....IT'S...MY....LIFE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11111
on New Hope by brazen 27 Oct 2002, 6:42 PM
The phrase "strong as an oak" is a really annoying cliche. Try "permanent as a conifer" or something.
on Another poem by Mutant_X 27 Oct 2002, 6:40 PM
This is like meta-angst. Pretty interesting stuff.
on glue by chinstrap 27 Oct 2002, 6:39 PM
Yeah except for any thin paper or foil. And it's garbage for non-porous materials. And it dries rigid which makes it useless for gluing materials which are under any stresses (like wood, for instance). All your needs? You must go through a lot of fucking construction paper and glitter you fucking pansy.
replying on Hedgehog's Dilemma by Shin-Bojangles 27 Oct 2002, 12:24 PM
In Amsterdam, they call it a "Royale w/ Fucknose"
replying on Surpass the Dream by darkhelmet10 27 Oct 2002, 6:44 AM
Skeletor kicked he-man's ass
on why? by little_angel_maria 27 Oct 2002, 12:06 AM
Thou dosth protest too much.
THIS POEM FUCKING ROCKS!