on My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus
27 Oct 2002, 7:08 PM
This is one of those time ASCII art is needed.
on Free to Not Know Me by jsab78
27 Oct 2002, 7:05 PM
Rhyme very forced. Make it mean something or don't rhyme.
on Just the Way by w~* ATHENA *~w
27 Oct 2002, 7:03 PM
If you were a boy you'd be so fucking gay. 8
on The TRust That Was Unreal (by WOOTNESS) by xanatos
27 Oct 2002, 7:03 PM
I saw someone who looked exactly like Chris Elliot today but he was selling postcards and knicknacks.
on Untitled by LucidRevelation
27 Oct 2002, 7:01 PM
gsdjkdsl;sdljfkjfsd not bad
on The First Poem by jrtails
27 Oct 2002, 6:57 PM
The purpose of poetry is not even to convey *a* mood, certainly not your fucking mood. You know, this goes to show how clueless most of the poets here are. Now, since the poem is so hilarious I will assume that this is a satire of bad poets and haiku in general. 9
on untitled2 by ThreeFourSix
27 Oct 2002, 6:55 PM
not clever enough to work. Unless one "gets it" as soon as they read it, you can assume you haven't been clear enough. Why not "and when lust is a must / trust turns to dust"? Granted it's a bit of a cliche but it's a silly poem.
on Something in the way by nopal
27 Oct 2002, 6:53 PM
This poem is not total garbage and I even enjoyed it.
on Nothin lasts by Mutant_X
27 Oct 2002, 6:48 PM
Sincerity alone is almost never enough for a poem to go on - this is an exception. Excellent work, try expanding the range of subject matters which you right about - don't just write about what you most strongly feel.
on Society's Sharades by New Life Drug
27 Oct 2002, 6:45 PM
IT'S MY LIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIFE AND IT'S NOW OR NEVER - I DON'T WANNA *LIVE* FOR-EVER - I JUST WANNA LIVE WHILE I'M ALIVE.....IT'S...MY....LIFE!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11111
on Another poem by Mutant_X
27 Oct 2002, 6:40 PM
This is like meta-angst. Pretty interesting stuff.
Yeah except for any thin paper or foil. And it's garbage for non-porous materials. And it dries rigid which makes it useless for gluing materials which are under any stresses (like wood, for instance). All your needs? You must go through a lot of fucking construction paper and glitter you fucking pansy.
replying on Hedgehog's Dilemma by Shin-Bojangles
27 Oct 2002, 12:24 PM
In Amsterdam, they call it a "Royale w/ Fucknose"
replying on Surpass the Dream by darkhelmet10
27 Oct 2002, 6:44 AM
Skeletor kicked he-man's ass
on why? by little_angel_maria
27 Oct 2002, 12:06 AM
Thou dosth protest too much.
on The wonderful happy relationship between two wonderful and caring people by Dark Angle
27 Oct 2002, 12:04 AM
THIS POEM FUCKING ROCKS!