regarding some deleted poem...	6-Aug-03/7:31 AM
Definitely one of the better and unrecognized poets here.
Re: Can you believe this piece of shit was #1? by horus8	8-Aug-03/8:21 PM
Still the man with brass balls filled with solid gold dancers. or had his way with solid gold dancers.
Re: Rearview mirrors by horus8	15-Aug-03/6:12 AM
Strong message. Mellow tone.
Re: Inet. mag. editors R jealous red haired Jews, oh and I'm 29 by horus8	7-Aug-03/5:27 AM
They say living well is the best revenge. Today is your day bro. Tonight is your night bro. Happy 29!!
Re: Myopic Labotomized Hubris by Retaliate	7-Aug-03/4:50 PM
Go ahead and hit the brake. Just let me change lanes first.
Re: for sue (20030815) by nentwined	15-Aug-03/4:55 PM
Bing fucking go!
Re: Happiness & Old Age by Caducus	11-Aug-03/5:46 PM
Blue ribbons here!
Re: Sagadahoc to Hudson by http://mulberryfairy	11-Aug-03/7:06 AM
I think s-1 l-3 is unnecessarily long. s-6, (soon),finally, maybe? s-9 opposite coasts? I'm a truck driver and verified by my atlas: Sagadahoc county,ME, Auburn, Lewiston area. To: Hudson, N.Y., I don't think you'd see much of CT. More like Mass. I am aware that this may be fiction(though it sounds like it may have happened, parts of it at least), This is one of my few areas of knowledge. That's my (big) ding on this. S-12 startle(d). S-13 drop the paranthetical, make 'em look it up. also, why only oral? I would think one would want to "access all areas", especially trying to go through such nonsense. Finally, S-13 (accelerating), breaking pace again, maybe. On a positive note, I really enjoyed this, and I think poetandknowit has a challenger in the poetry/prose arena.
Re: blue lilac and I (edit) by richa	7-Aug-03/4:55 PM
...angered by salmon.... but it doesn't fit the tone of your piece. I'm green with anchovies.Sorry, dont like the trombone. another instrument maybe.
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Aug-03/8:12 AM
You put the lime in the coconut and mix it all up!
Re: Satyrs and fluting the teachers by Jeremi B. Handrinos	4-Aug-03/1:58 PM
I, unfortunately, am not the powers that be. Otherwise I'd hand you your poetryc diploma and kick your fucking ass off poemranker!!!!
Re: epicentre by richa	6-Aug-03/7:26 AM
I'm going to rifle through your files for a little while. Your average is very consistent. I find that fascinating for some reason. This is excellent btw.
Re: The Longest Wait (Revised) by Caducus	5-Aug-03/4:31 PM
I prefer your closing line because it seems (she) was a lover or girlfriend. and you're going home to silence or the lack of a second body. I think Zs suggestion would lead me to think "mother". Croupier? absolutely.
Re: A parking lot, a smoke, and the pleasure of being alone by thepinkbunnyofdoom	5-Aug-03/4:20 PM
Pinkmeister, This does have potential. It NEEDS to drop the (sentence) structure. and it reepats itself for an ending. It's good to play poet. It's better to back it up with some work.
Re: Three Brothers by EAger to Offend	8-Aug-03/5:59 AM
You just described most rankers!
Re: whilst the bells ring by richa	15-Aug-03/6:20 AM
Time to take your turn at the top. Brilliant.
Re: I An Anew (re edit) by scitz	8-Aug-03/6:30 AM
rids? or rides. thats the only thing that trips me.
Re: Hardcore Denial or Sumpin'. by Shardik	11-Aug-03/7:15 AM
Start-up to wheels-up, sans warm up. Gone.
Re: Satyrs and fluting the teachers by Jeremi B. Handrinos	4-Aug-03/2:00 PM
worker(s)!
Re: Portsmouth belle 3 by Garrett S Sexton	8-Aug-03/4:21 PM
S-4 obviously. and the last line can lose (amongst) and simplify and still be ok.