Re: I Speak of Expanses by anitawit	25-Apr-03/6:44 AM
Lines 2 and 7 seem a wee off beat. but it's quite enjoyable.
Re: The Days Are Dying by anitawit	22-Apr-03/6:35 AM
bingo.
Re: Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof	22-Apr-03/4:12 PM
If this ever dissappears, I'll die.
Re: spring by <~>	23-Apr-03/2:14 PM
well.... so much for beer bottles.
Re: Noone really knows by CHRMEcountryGRL	21-Apr-03/9:23 PM
You need some concrete. To grind off that chrome.
Re: Beauty, sleeping (revised) by Ranger	24-Apr-03/5:14 PM
Nice to know you've got a coach. The woodsman part seemed humorous, to me. And the knigdom manager made it seem like you gave up. Just my view. I'm rather blind at the moment.
Re: Landscapes In The Sky by anitawit	25-Apr-03/6:49 AM
I think myriad(s). I think when you wrote this, you sat down and wrote without thinking, just wrote. and it works. 8 I think the other is better because you put work into it. both are swell.
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Apr-03/5:57 AM
I must be missing something. S-3 and the last sum it up for me. It's good. It's you. I just think you are capable of more.;)
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Apr-03/6:00 AM
drop the (s) from insomniac. Seems pretty beefy otherwise.
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Apr-03/6:06 AM
Drats! I love the beat. The seeming repetetive nature of the words kills me. Trim and blend, I would recommend.
Re: Jenny Jones, Jenny Jones by bondjedi	24-Apr-03/6:10 AM
Do all of these shows. together.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Apr-03/7:03 PM
The easterly wind carries much weight. When it gets where it is going it may carry hate. Tread lightly on foreign land. Say, I tweaked (my wife) care to peek? She likes it when I tweak her.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Apr-03/6:28 AM
Whats babycham? Chambord? The changes are subtle but better. Still a fun story.
Re: The Trees by anitawit	22-Apr-03/6:32 AM
um, neeter, paki dinged me for opening with a question once. this shows me why. That is the only change. Very good. Less is more always works for me.
Re: When the Future Comes to Pass by e1ementfire	22-Apr-03/6:44 AM
replEnished. A religious Eminem? Liked it anyway.
Re: suck fucker punch by wordho	23-Apr-03/5:49 AM
the short uncapped sentences really bring out the anger/frustration. interesting tool you have there. or lack thereof.
regarding some deleted poem...	21-Apr-03/6:43 PM
nutty, but on point
regarding some deleted poem...	21-Apr-03/6:45 PM
no. make a haiku for the utensil drawer.
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Apr-03/5:45 PM
Ignore me. I'm polluted and need to clear my head.
Re: isms and ities by Amelia	23-Apr-03/2:10 PM
Don't ever stop reaching.....