Comments byINTRANSIT, 1061–1080 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

-inner taste- the bottom line to everything. I would like to see this updated in 3-6 months to hopefully include a mr. rockmage and a mrs. Italy angel. thank you for.....just being you.
on Under Blood Oak by horus8 3 Oct 2003, 5:05 PM
This is near top-of-your-game stuff. Great tripodal balance you have with the serious/silly/outrageous. thats for you. personally.
replying on water falls by Bill Z Bub 2 Oct 2003, 8:31 PM
go avs? Ahem.

GO AVS!!!!
replying on Gone missing by INTRANSIT 2 Oct 2003, 8:28 PM
I think I can handle heavier critiquing on some things. Care to offer?
replying on Gone missing by INTRANSIT 2 Oct 2003, 8:25 PM
my bad.
replying on Gone missing by INTRANSIT 2 Oct 2003, 8:23 PM
well that explains alot. why is it you never seem to show up when I'm writing better stuff?
replying on Gone missing by INTRANSIT 2 Oct 2003, 8:14 PM
from the inventor of the Kale gun. no doubt.
replying on Gone missing by INTRANSIT 2 Oct 2003, 8:13 PM
I suppose there's no hiding it now eh? howaya howaya howaya?
on water falls by Bill Z Bub 2 Oct 2003, 8:11 PM
can you teach me how to do that? It is sooo terribly missing from my poetry. much better sitting this way it is it is. 9.5 because this was easy for you.
replying on Gone missing by INTRANSIT 2 Oct 2003, 8:07 PM
GAH! I can't believe I did that!!! excuse me while i flog myself repeatedly with a garage door spring.


fixed. where is she, anyway?
on The Fucktory by horus8 2 Oct 2003, 7:03 PM
s-4 you left out a k. on purpose probably. no. I don't mean a k as in A.K.-47 either. and you're a fam crammin toyota sienna mini van. give it up.
on angst by nentwined 2 Oct 2003, 6:26 PM
need another drum of coffee/espresso/NOS?
on A London Cafe by mrpresident 2 Oct 2003, 7:49 AM
a bird in the hand....
on the way things are goin' by irishfolksuicide 2 Oct 2003, 7:42 AM
bull moo- seems a bit comical. good thought provoker.
on Manila by poetandknowit 2 Oct 2003, 6:37 AM
Still angry children dump 1s. Good to see you drop by from time to time. This one has inspired me to try something new. details. ha! imagine that.
replying on Afraid by Brittanyy 1 Oct 2003, 7:02 PM
older sis, eh? I got no sibs. have no clue what it's all about.
on whimsicals by nentwined 1 Oct 2003, 6:58 PM
whip-crackin' good.
replying on Afraid by Brittanyy 1 Oct 2003, 6:56 PM
how young?
replying on Afraid by Brittanyy 1 Oct 2003, 6:56 PM
how young?
on Afraid by Brittanyy 1 Oct 2003, 6:52 PM
What happened to Gwen? If I may ask.