Comments byINTRANSIT, 1241–1260 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on To Mouse and Reason by Spindle 15 Jun 2003, 8:12 AM
Great title, great moniker. poor poem . IPK's right.
try again.
replying on In (ghazal) by INTRANSIT 14 Jun 2003, 8:08 PM
right away, kewpi doll. oh, and heres a rose, for yew.
replying on In (ghazal) by INTRANSIT 14 Jun 2003, 8:06 PM
thanks! Had to try sumpn' new. Horus is right though, it's a little disconnected.
A little tungsten in cheek, no?
replying on In (ghazal) by INTRANSIT 14 Jun 2003, 9:42 AM
Are you talking punctuation? or phrasing,schweetie.
replying on Goddess of the vineyard by INTRANSIT 13 Jun 2003, 2:49 PM
yes,yes,yes,maybe. if you say talked briefly about something other than the exchange of money for fuel,yes. but he/she does not have influence OVER you. some change happens,even if it is not immediately apparent. am I making sense?
replying on Goddess of the vineyard by INTRANSIT 13 Jun 2003, 9:32 AM
well, yes, that's the downside. I was thinking more on a spiritual level. Maybe I'm just being influenced because I'm reading Rumi right now.
replying on Goddess of the vineyard by INTRANSIT 13 Jun 2003, 8:40 AM
a short interaction between two people, or a group of people, leaves something on or in all parties involved.
replying on Goddess of the vineyard by INTRANSIT 13 Jun 2003, 8:11 AM
mornin'. and yes, you, all of her friends. I have found, that once a life has been entered, it is there for eternity. whether the soul is concious of it, or not.
on Dirge by Nicholas Jones 13 Jun 2003, 8:01 AM
battling the atrophy of a learned response culture.
replying on Goddess of the vineyard by INTRANSIT 13 Jun 2003, 7:41 AM
yes, she is only part of the vineyard, not the winery. and she did.:( I pray she keeps in touch with us all.
replying on How I fuck Freud off in the shower by horus8 12 Jun 2003, 6:47 PM
no,I'm just jerkin ya. I mean you're rubbing off on me. DAMNIT JESU!!! LOOK WHAT YOU'RE DOING!!!!!
on Lake Pyramid's Secret by Bachus 12 Jun 2003, 6:43 PM
I remember when I used to do that.lol.
on How I fuck Freud off in the shower by horus8 12 Jun 2003, 6:33 PM
am I gay if I associate with the lot of ya?
replying on Something You'll never understand by thepinkbunnyofdoom 12 Jun 2003, 6:32 PM
nice to see someone so young have a backbone. keep it you'll need it all life long. take this piece, stack it up, play shuffle the statements with them, and see what comes up. you never know.
an olympic swimmer next to the rope lane divider?
on How I fuck Freud off in the shower by horus8 12 Jun 2003, 6:09 PM
froot loop. pimple is correct though.
on Warlocks by <{Baba^Yaga}> 12 Jun 2003, 1:04 PM
hazards coming back to hazard you.
really? no, rely. Anywho, I'll bare my balls that you may kick them, firmedly. go for the hook. open with the fencing scene, then backtrack to the birthday party. I am jealous. I am blonde. i am erect? was not was. 10 because you put FORT into this. yes. encore.
on Coloured waifs home by horus8 12 Jun 2003, 11:59 AM
right on the head.