on Break Down by Jeremi B. Handrinos
6 Jun 2003, 6:41 AM
My friends engine dropped a valve once. he brought it home in a bucket that night. 3 for the rod. 3 for the ex "hero" 2 for Merle, 2$ for a stiff cup of coffee.
on Angels & Dinosaurs by Jeremi B. Handrinos
6 Jun 2003, 6:30 AM
The repetetive-ness monster is here. I know you write a phenomenal amount and that you've allowed yourself to be distracted for the moment. IF you like these scribblings, then do them a propellor thing they deserve.
on sharkmouth by Bill Z Bub
5 Jun 2003, 5:41 PM
Ok. so, if my catamaran, which sadly, sank,(there's a hunnert mousuits looking for it now) is an ode, then this scU-REAMS LYRICS!!! Hello-o? anybody listening? no? fine. whatever.
great piece. drop the 'splaining. go.
great piece. drop the 'splaining. go.
on Jeremi B. Handrinos: Part 2 by wCUNTw
5 Jun 2003, 7:27 AM
No. He's a 600 cubic inch supercharged JP-4 injected Hemi powered steamroller with rubber edged drive wheel.
And if you get in his way, well that's your own damn fault.
And if you get in his way, well that's your own damn fault.
on Taliban Ambush by scitz
5 Jun 2003, 7:21 AM
dingdingdingding!! We have a winner!!!
on A Moment In Nowhere by Mr Pig
5 Jun 2003, 7:20 AM
there are no words.....
replying on Interview with a Steven King by Bachus
3 Jun 2003, 1:05 PM
Aye, aye.
on Interview with a Steven King by Bachus
3 Jun 2003, 7:30 AM
So tell me, Senator, where does one go when the off, and strange have been so well wrappered by you and the nappied one? WAIT! I know! No ones done the Rockettes!
YES! I'm off to Radio City Music Hall!!!!
Intransit grabs coat, flails the door open, rushes into the street kneecapping himself on the firehydrant, falls back first into the middle of the street only to have a purple smurf ascend from the manhole (thats a funny word) and yell "Whats all the ruckus?! Me and the Mrs. was gettin' it on when you completely stifled my stiffie, man!"
Smurf pokes intransit in the eye with a rolodex.
YES! I'm off to Radio City Music Hall!!!!
Intransit grabs coat, flails the door open, rushes into the street kneecapping himself on the firehydrant, falls back first into the middle of the street only to have a purple smurf ascend from the manhole (thats a funny word) and yell "Whats all the ruckus?! Me and the Mrs. was gettin' it on when you completely stifled my stiffie, man!"
Smurf pokes intransit in the eye with a rolodex.
on Four Chapters from the Detective Plum files by horus8
2 Jun 2003, 6:41 AM
Your armpit puncture wound has problems. namely gravity. "practically borderline nauseating" redundant?
sounds like a semi-serious writ. do it again and do it write. needs a tad more humor if thats what you're trying to do.my <.02. that is all.
sounds like a semi-serious writ. do it again and do it write. needs a tad more humor if thats what you're trying to do.my <.02. that is all.
on There is no Happy Hour in Bakersfield, Ca. by horus8
1 Jun 2003, 9:42 AM
So long ago I read this. too immature to fully appreciate its product. It's fermenting well in my cask.
on I shot speed by horus8
31 May 2003, 8:15 AM
Good. Now I don't have to get lit up and drive like a Silverback on Silverleaves for the sake of growing a curbless days.
replying on The Bleeding Rose by BleedingRose
30 May 2003, 5:54 PM
Wow. I've heard that fat is flammable. Good thing no one came too close with a See-Gar.
on Luekemia Tacosalad by Shardik
30 May 2003, 5:51 PM
Open mike with a mellow random Sax backdrop.
on The Bleeding Rose by BleedingRose
30 May 2003, 5:28 PM
Do you read your own, or have some one read it aloud to you? It's a BIG help if you don't. Sounds a bit repetetive to me. I like the summary.
replying on The Bleeding Rose by BleedingRose
30 May 2003, 4:56 PM
I do know what a kidney is. It's a...uh....an....well,Iused to know what a kidney was until I started driving a truck! I'm working on my literacy, be patient. please. I don't want to get top heavy and flip over taking a curve too fast. Poemranker is my twelve-step program to recovery. I'm doing well. Thank you for your concern -=Dark_Angel=-.