Comments byINTRANSIT, 1301–1320 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Pass the salt, Peter by Bachus 29 May 2003, 3:20 PM
You always do.
replying on At the circle K by <{Baba^Yaga}> 29 May 2003, 6:27 AM
maaaan. i hate it when that happens.
on Plastic Posies by BleedingRose 28 May 2003, 2:09 PM
You're bringing her a plastic eye? What? Maybe she'd like a nice neck brace.
on At the circle K by <{Baba^Yaga}> 28 May 2003, 2:05 PM
way to go, Guitarzan. Now, what did you do with the Electric Frankenstein?

whoops. there i go again.
on Cliche by Blue Magpie 28 May 2003, 5:14 AM
Bingo.
on the midget of humiliation by Bill Z Bub 28 May 2003, 5:05 AM
I'm glad to have to vote again. If I'm reading this right, it is positioned as a reversal of events.
on The last of the sworn heels by Bachus 28 May 2003, 4:59 AM
I must give you back your golden Q-Tip award for this.
The awards I ordered didn't make it through the firefight.
replying on Timing by INTRANSIT 27 May 2003, 8:47 PM
Well, you're definitely a right hand drive, that's for sure. That is no advertisement. That was well engineered art. period.
Ask that troop how are they gonna top themselves? Thanks for the sock in the gut blasting me backwards into a reality check!!!! I still got an appointment though. gotta start someplace.
on Hold That Pose by Wulf 26 May 2003, 7:08 PM
1mc. This is not your captain speaking. The baby is drowning. I repeat. The baby is bowling. That is all.
on Para Metres by Blue Magpie 25 May 2003, 4:29 PM
Just read it aloud to yourself, then tweak thebeats that go bump. it'll be perfect. loved it.
replying on the midget of humiliation by Bill Z Bub 24 May 2003, 9:02 PM
'tis. I'm all of 25% Irish. woo hoo.
replying on the midget of humiliation by Bill Z Bub 24 May 2003, 9:00 PM
I'm crashin'. Gotta move some cheap ass Kia product tomorrow. Maybe by that time I'll have written something worth ranking. Me?
HA!
replying on the midget of humiliation by Bill Z Bub 24 May 2003, 8:56 PM
One of the last lines from "gone in 60 seconds". I guess this isn't the crowd for those type of shenanigans eh?
replying on the midget of humiliation by Bill Z Bub 24 May 2003, 8:46 PM
Yes, then. A nice hydraulic lift maybe?
on Those Without Graves by Wulf 24 May 2003, 8:45 PM
Too tired to pick nits. Worth the read, definitely.
replying on the midget of humiliation by Bill Z Bub 24 May 2003, 8:38 PM
Nice little stunt you pulled, tearing up the town....you and your Eleanor.
on Warmth by shwenatjadeflower 21 May 2003, 7:45 PM
Were you attempting a villanelle?
on Dr. Dr. by psikosis 21 May 2003, 3:42 PM
udder.
replying on Burst! by INTRANSIT 20 May 2003, 3:38 PM
Hunky-dory. wave: too small. Tsunami: too big. Hmmmmm.
on The Order Of Things by Mr Pig 20 May 2003, 6:28 AM
From a poetic standpoint: tangible(comma)even
drop the (but)last line of s-2. I read this aloud and almost cried. I think this is destined to knock me off.
I'm inspired to do some houscleaning on "tingling".