replying on Limericks of hot seething love, gone bad. by horus8
12 Mar 2003, 7:30 AM
How dare you blaspheme my fathers sacred girl!!! now twist and shout before I spring you carpeted. fred.
on Anna N. Smiths vagina monologue in Evangelistic tongues by horus8
12 Mar 2003, 7:26 AM
For a while I thought you might be giving up the rant-face. Glad you didn't. I feel sorry for her son. She seems incapable of anything of value.
on The Wooden Armchair Of Similar Dreams by Caducus
12 Mar 2003, 7:15 AM
It was so long ago, I'm unaware of the changes. Feels strong still.
on On coming across a field of deer one afternoon (2) by <~>
11 Mar 2003, 7:03 AM
I know why sprung is there ,but is'nt it past tense? this is happening now, i gather. Your pace is slowed with commas,while hasting? You're slowing something that happens quickly,yes? that is all. compared to v-1 this works better. lighter.
replying on Waiting to exit by INTRANSIT
11 Mar 2003, 6:51 AM
do you have a moment for "lightest touch"?
replying on Waiting to exit by INTRANSIT
11 Mar 2003, 6:48 AM
mornin'. metaphor for "american dream" or things along that line. w're taught rules without reasoning. I know it needs work. I'm not framed for it at the moment. thanks z.
replying on Waiting to exit by INTRANSIT
11 Mar 2003, 6:23 AM
I'm assuming you are referring to this poem. I'm letting it percolate for now. Could use some help with my "eskimo" and my "runes" when you get a moment. I'm particularly fond of them and would like to see them break gravity. glad to see yu are well. thank you.
on Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof
10 Mar 2003, 8:00 PM
I still have yet to find a superior.
on Family Portrait by Mr Pig
10 Mar 2003, 7:46 PM
Drats! I do believe my speed reading from high school has become malignant.
on Hecate, and the high hunt by <{Baba^Yaga}>
10 Mar 2003, 3:24 PM
Glad to see you can still get fired up. FWOT. the only way.
on Family Portrait by Mr Pig
10 Mar 2003, 3:16 PM
S-2 L-13 delete or blend ,maybe. I assumed there was a passing of time when the cuckoos flocked. Send your dad your guts.
on this old man (edit) by Bill Z Bub
10 Mar 2003, 5:43 AM
Ok. What Z said about the hat and line walkers were 2 of my dislikes. Your glitterati swerve to avoid, but they're overhead?
And S-1 old men/this old man/thisle man. You know me, less is more where I come from. lose one i think.
Other than that eees guut,yah.
And S-1 old men/this old man/thisle man. You know me, less is more where I come from. lose one i think.
Other than that eees guut,yah.
replying on this old man (edit) by Bill Z Bub
9 Mar 2003, 8:18 AM
Sorry 'bout that Mr. B. I must've logged off just before you logged on or sumpn. The trky addr is correct. We'll chat about my poem as well.
on this old man (edit) by Bill Z Bub
9 Mar 2003, 6:54 AM
Like to discuss some beefs I have here. E-mail me.
Canuckistan? I turn at the drowning pines, right?
Canuckistan? I turn at the drowning pines, right?
replying on The lightest touch by INTRANSIT
9 Mar 2003, 6:47 AM
Your seven suggests a lacking somewhere. Could you point me in the right direction sir?
on War Begins on Tuesday by Nicholas Jones
8 Mar 2003, 2:41 PM
Tuesday doesn't work for you? If I move my tae-bo and my luncheon with Mao, I can push the invasion to next Wed. Is that better? good. never put off til tomorrow.....
on venttent3 by Crakyamuni
8 Mar 2003, 2:36 PM
venting well. some spelling errs. find em. fix em. that is all.
on this can be no more than shit by Crakyamuni
8 Mar 2003, 2:31 PM
ass hair. lol. that puts things in perspective doesn't it?
on if only you could read my mind love by sk8boardandpoems
8 Mar 2003, 7:38 AM
Caducus is most correct. 6 for effort.
And C, A-thank you suh!
And C, A-thank you suh!