Comments byINTRANSIT, 1581–1600 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Haffner's Mill by powerline 1 Jan 2003, 8:08 AM
I particularly like the last stanza. It tells me the storm was a financial or political storm or a mass of people. Not horrible weather. I picture an old church or building with gargoyles. I dinged you two for the "sale".
replying on Februarys mother by INTRANSIT 1 Jan 2003, 8:04 AM
Would you mind telling me what you saw or felt when you read this? I'm so afraid of touching this one, but an outside view is tantamount to improvement,yes?
on Haffner's Mill by powerline 31 Dec 2002, 3:34 PM
Dude, this is seriously good. I have something about a building that has yet to go past scrbbled notes. Thank you for the inspiration.
replying on The Eskimo and the fish by INTRANSIT 31 Dec 2002, 5:35 AM
Freedoms of simplicity" is close. I'll work on another title,maybe. What else can you tell me from this ? Thank you Mrs G.
replying on The Eskimo and the fish by INTRANSIT 30 Dec 2002, 6:39 PM
There's a story in a story here. Tell me what you see, please.
Thanks
on Instantly by Quarton 30 Dec 2002, 1:54 PM
No matter how fast we move, Q, we're still too damn slow. Loved S-3. Big number.
on Blues by Christof 30 Dec 2002, 1:25 PM
fan TASTIQUE!
on Little Johnie's Jihad by <{Baba^Yaga}> 24 Dec 2002, 5:32 PM
Yours rocks as well, sir.
replying on Paying for Sin by kaykat 24 Dec 2002, 2:53 PM
Good for you KK. I don't do well with critical humor. You're off to a better start than I am.
replying on Rewrite of a goof poem. by INTRANSIT 24 Dec 2002, 2:51 PM
I like the original better. Thanks for the P\F KK.
replying on Dirty bomb, code name: PLUTONIUM by horus8 24 Dec 2002, 2:28 PM
If honesty equals dick sucking, then I'm guilty. Any thing else is just political verbal trash. Now all I need is a Cocaine account and an 8yr college diploma and I can be as perfect as any other C.E.O.
on Garden of confusion by Sugarbbybuttrfly 24 Dec 2002, 9:46 AM
Frustrated. Good. Dangerous. Last line needs a (?).
on The Coming Light by poetandknowit 24 Dec 2002, 9:33 AM
Too bad despair wins. Not my cup of tea,you might have guessed
on Dirty bomb, code name: PLUTONIUM by horus8 24 Dec 2002, 9:25 AM
Again, at my own peril, I liked it.
I think people are jealous of you because you are comfortable in your insanity. Self comfort is something to be admired. if it exists.
on Thought by Quarton 24 Dec 2002, 9:04 AM
Most excellent,sir.
on The Coming Light by poetandknowit 23 Dec 2002, 2:38 PM
I feel something secondary going on here. Can't find it yet. I'll come back.
replying on Foreplay by INTRANSIT 23 Dec 2002, 2:30 PM
I saw 'em too. friggin T\S kiosks! Round 'em all up for a revote whilst I don my Letter man costume.
on strange beds (1983) by Bill Z Bub 23 Dec 2002, 2:11 PM
S-3 cornfuses me a bit. I am getting young lust from it though.
on Here There Be Dragons by blkarakagain 23 Dec 2002, 2:05 PM
7 for the effort. tear it down, weld and machine the crank,magnaflux the rods, new slugs,jugs and plugs. bearings. It'll run good.
replying on Foreplay by INTRANSIT 23 Dec 2002, 10:17 AM
you're awfully close. there's pasta involved. but what else?