on missing time by Bill Z Bub
22 Dec 2002, 3:34 PM
The "madness" stanza trips some how between wall and door? Close to perfection ,I'd say.
on downtown bus by Bill Z Bub
20 Dec 2002, 5:17 PM
Hey! Down in front! damn people.
replying on of people and places (final cut)I by INTRANSIT
20 Dec 2002, 4:08 PM
Thanks for the comments folks. I think it's quite possibly the worst thing I've ever written. i dunno.
on At the circle K by <{Baba^Yaga}>
20 Dec 2002, 12:48 PM
I still know nothing of music but what I hear. Self plug,last comment? I'll try to get to L.A. Next year. Home comp. on fritz. I'll need thos addresses later,again.
on joyriding by Bill Z Bub
19 Dec 2002, 7:04 PM
Hot for teacher? Definitely a thinker.
on A christmas thought by keatsImnot
18 Dec 2002, 6:10 PM
Nice twist of the knife there!
replying on of people and places (final cut)I by INTRANSIT
18 Dec 2002, 5:18 PM
you are correct m'lady. I was looking at the floor when the answer appeared. cool? low on singles again.
on fa11ing by Bill Z Bub
18 Dec 2002, 5:12 PM
This kicks ass.
replying on of people and places (final cut)I by INTRANSIT
18 Dec 2002, 5:04 PM
My first problem is not specifying the (board ) not necessarily the pieces. (Chess is a kick ass game. One that I will gladly suck at for the rest of my life.) I stay away from the media most of the time . The constant bad news is a strain on my muse. That's why I missed the Lott thing. Plus I think it's a yearly event that some political putz says something racially poor. Thanks for your help C. Not quite what I'm looking for though.
replying on of people and places (final cut)I by INTRANSIT
17 Dec 2002, 6:40 PM
What a wonderful birthday gift you have given me,by the way. Your cordialness(sp?). Thank you.
replying on of people and places (final cut)I by INTRANSIT
17 Dec 2002, 6:33 PM
Well, if I am one race and you are another,can we not stand close to one another and get along just fine? Lott? Sorry, unknown. I'm completely lost on the hierarchy angle. I agree with the change of the opening line though. Readers are quickly fickle.
replying on of people and places (final cut)I by INTRANSIT
17 Dec 2002, 6:13 PM
Knock it off you two or I will repost the damn rose poem.
This happens to be what this poem is about:respecting others space. Being together without invasion. And a small racial metaphor as well.
This happens to be what this poem is about:respecting others space. Being together without invasion. And a small racial metaphor as well.
replying on of people and places (final cut)I by INTRANSIT
17 Dec 2002, 2:30 PM
yes, and thank you. I will try harder to relax in your presence.
do you think gws' right that it needs a little more? <60 Ill try ya later 10q
do you think gws' right that it needs a little more? <60 Ill try ya later 10q
replying on of people and places (final cut)I by INTRANSIT
17 Dec 2002, 2:24 PM
ok, mr knowit. Changed. And I'm listening. 6min left on stupid timer.
replying on A holiday warning by INTRANSIT
16 Dec 2002, 6:13 AM
Thanks for the comments people. I'ts just about not paying attention to what you are doing. thats all. I'm really sorry everyone spent their time on this. It's a throw-away. geez Y'all know I can do better. 10-4?
replying on A holiday warning by INTRANSIT
15 Dec 2002, 6:26 PM
not tonight dear, I have a headache.
replying on A holiday warning by INTRANSIT
15 Dec 2002, 6:22 PM
a most excellent suggestion, good Sir Knight. and thank you.
,I'm witcha.