on missing time by Bill Z Bub
9 Dec 2002, 1:27 PM
Personally, I dig the mix of free verse splashed with rhyme. An enjoyable twist. The waking could be an artist, loved it.
on How the Mighty Fall by jdsnyd
9 Dec 2002, 1:21 PM
No arguements here. Keep the left door shut.
on triple suicide server line by Bill Z Bub
9 Dec 2002, 1:18 PM
I've been through two suicides in my life now.(not me)I'm hardening to them quickly. They're sad and selfish. nothing more. funny write.
on Walter Cronkite by UnityMitford
9 Dec 2002, 1:14 PM
Maybe a month of his paycheck? I like anything that stabs.
replying on Panning for gold by INTRANSIT
9 Dec 2002, 12:54 PM
those putzes in Denver ARE dildos. Oh wait, that's a compliment.
disregard.
disregard.
replying on Panning for gold by INTRANSIT
9 Dec 2002, 12:52 PM
in the case of my dispatchers: rotten teeth!
on Missing the In-Between by <~>
9 Dec 2002, 10:27 AM
Somehow I can't imagine you ever being lonely.
replying on And uncle sam says... by INTRANSIT
9 Dec 2002, 10:24 AM
Thanks for voting y'all. The space bar really wasn't working on that terminal.
on nothing, as today by <~>
4 Dec 2002, 4:41 AM
I'd say you were rightfully movedd.
on Poem For Times Such As These by Nicholas Jones
4 Dec 2002, 4:37 AM
ok then, how about this: thanks foor fucking up my only form of escapism! or, hows about we all ship over to iraq and put ourselves in the line of fire for a "good cause" instead of writing poetry that accomplishes NOTHING!!
on want of warmth by <~>
4 Dec 2002, 4:30 AM
another one of your fab 2 way haiku
on Silence by Cha no Onna
3 Dec 2002, 4:13 PM
Z is big help. always. welcome,and nice entry work too.
on she said by Bill Z Bub
3 Dec 2002, 3:52 PM
Yes, the title gives too much away.
Love the beat! good job devil man.
Love the beat! good job devil man.
on There is no Happy Hour in Bakersfield, Ca. by horus8
2 Dec 2002, 4:13 PM
pouring it on,are we? Fine job too!
do it again!
do it again!
on No One Cares by Quarton
29 Nov 2002, 4:58 PM
Fuck I hate the truth.
replying on ode to zzinnia by daniella
29 Nov 2002, 4:48 PM
AYE AYE CAP'N!!!
on ode to zzinnia by daniella
29 Nov 2002, 4:47 PM
She is a spicy meat-aball!
on Once upon a Christmas Eve by exoticwriter
29 Nov 2002, 4:35 PM
every day I pray for this.
on Shut the fuck up and fix me a Scoobie snack. by Bachus
27 Nov 2002, 6:49 PM
Definitely 2 shags here!
replying on The Nagian, or, Red Be Unread by <~>
27 Nov 2002, 6:27 PM
Copy that I did!