Comments byINTRANSIT, 1681–1700 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on The Nagian, or, Red Be Unread by <~> 27 Nov 2002, 2:43 PM
Works for me. Even if it is misshapen.
on Some place west of here, or the big blah blah. both apply by horus8 27 Nov 2002, 2:32 PM
....just kickin' here,aint no boot lickin' here...
on two poles are better than one by <~> 27 Nov 2002, 2:22 PM
Megadeths' "sweating bullets" comes to mind.
on Exhaustion by vulcan 27 Nov 2002, 2:04 PM
Get your eyes checked. That won't happen as often.
replying on Frozen beauty by INTRANSIT 27 Nov 2002, 1:56 PM
I see what you mean. They're guarding the sky,though. That makes them over,yes?
replying on Check Yourself by INTRANSIT 27 Nov 2002, 12:51 PM
Got it. thanks for expanding my vocab. What is my homework assignment? Be specific:#
replying on Frozen beauty by INTRANSIT 27 Nov 2002, 12:44 PM
I guess haiku don't need titles do they? So what didn't I do right here?
replying on Check Yourself by INTRANSIT 27 Nov 2002, 8:07 AM
As is my wha? S-4 is off rythm I think. thinking.......
replying on Check Yourself by INTRANSIT 27 Nov 2002, 7:49 AM
The judge went first to give it kilter. New stanza added. better?
replying on Check Yourself by INTRANSIT 26 Nov 2002, 8:13 PM
damn. I'll work it tomorrow. Thanks z.
replying on Charlie by INTRANSIT 26 Nov 2002, 8:11 PM
I'll re-post one of my other haikus tomorrow which is better. I just did this 'cause I really love this goldfish my wife bought me weeks ago.
replying on Charlie by INTRANSIT 26 Nov 2002, 7:33 PM
Well duh. I could've done that considering the title is a proper name. Um, swing what? I'm hung like a stud hamster!
replying on Charlie by INTRANSIT 26 Nov 2002, 7:30 PM
A god's wife? She pulled her stuff around the same time I did. That was wierd. I prefer to stay as close to the proper form and topic as I can. I'm all for anything poignant or humorous though.
on ode to horus by daniella 26 Nov 2002, 7:25 PM
Both of these made me laugh. Thanks.
replying on Check Yourself by INTRANSIT 26 Nov 2002, 7:21 PM
nice catch, thanks. Does the rest of the beat work?
replying on Charlie by INTRANSIT 26 Nov 2002, 7:18 PM
I will, eventually. Thank you, and you're not a big fan of the haiku are you?
replying on Charlie by INTRANSIT 26 Nov 2002, 7:02 PM
Insecurity, mostly. Trying to balance work,poetry and time with my wife is frustrating. I'd rather verse and learn more than anything right now. Would you comment on my haiku, please.
replying on Charlie by INTRANSIT 26 Nov 2002, 7:00 PM
Yes, actually he does.
replying on Night-mare by INTRANSIT 20 Nov 2002, 9:03 PM
I agree, fuckit. I'm too tired to care right now anyway. gotta move some fuckin fords.
replying on Night-mare by INTRANSIT 20 Nov 2002, 8:50 PM
The contradiction is a fragrance and woman#1 expecting her beau to be faithful while she wasn't. Romance: Fragrance and woman#2 This hs nothing to do with target stores. Obviously that must go.