on untitled by ThreeFourSix
23 Sep 2002, 2:54 PM
I hate it when they don't listen! 7 his could use more and not hurt it.
on Universal Musings by blu143
23 Sep 2002, 2:51 PM
Trim this by the first fifty-percent and let it fly.7
on Me and She. by peach835
23 Sep 2002, 5:52 AM
Circ-ular! Love it! Fun! Poignant too.8
on Punishment and Punishment again by vulcan
23 Sep 2002, 5:49 AM
Sooooooo much with sooooo little.
This is artful!!!!!! 9
This is artful!!!!!! 9
on suffer the child by edge
23 Sep 2002, 5:43 AM
Oh how I hate pain and suffering. However as a lyric this does fly pretty easily. Can't think......8
on .:|bittersweet|:. by emman
23 Sep 2002, 5:38 AM
This has a subtle power,and 3 idea possibilities.Alittle ironing, simplification and BOOM! it's there. 8
on When The Iron Curtain Came Down by RoseEyes
23 Sep 2002, 5:33 AM
The"walls" went up late, then came down quickly.First group seems a little off. Easy to read,liked it.7
on Here In The Heart of Amber by Lenore
23 Sep 2002, 5:24 AM
Good stuff! Tree sap color? A girls broken heart? I like poems that lend themselves to 2 way thoughts. 8
on Faded by aperfecttool77
23 Sep 2002, 5:17 AM
Awareness is important, action is more. Good product. Go deeper!
on Ex In Bonds by OneFingerAnswer
22 Sep 2002, 7:04 PM
Nice rhyme! Almost fooled me with the title, or did you? Next time, turn it up!
on The End OF Me by Birdman42s
22 Sep 2002, 7:00 PM
If at first you don't succeed...
Iron it out, otherwise it works.
Iron it out, otherwise it works.
on Lysander cried by bornagainpoet
22 Sep 2002, 6:57 PM
I like simplicity, could be modified to rhyme without losing it's intent. Good stuff!
on I Think by PawnedTidal
22 Sep 2002, 6:47 PM
Nice. Clean. Too surfacy though, you dipped well with the angel/amiss. Go deeper.
on america's promise by dylansong
22 Sep 2002, 6:38 PM
When I find a solution I'll let you know. I tire of tragedy though.
Ironically, I cant help you.
Ironically, I cant help you.
on the silent storm by mallory180
22 Sep 2002, 6:32 PM
Distributors go round, 'till they get stuck. Don't ask 'cause I don't know. Less is more here I think. I felt it though. (Hoping to find???????)
on The Class of 2012 by jess33
22 Sep 2002, 6:27 PM
Simple, truthful. Rework for a little fluidity maybe? Agreeable!
on For James Thomson(1834-1882):an Epitaph by vulcan
22 Sep 2002, 6:15 PM
Go on wit yo bad self!! I don't know this writer but now I want to.