Comments byINTRANSIT, 1941–1960 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on The Nights Draw In by Nicholas Jones 25 Sep 2002, 5:24 AM
You ARE prepared. Yup put label back on. Then "acquire" a ride!
Descriptive warm fuzzies abound.9
on Noblesse Oblige by Christof 25 Sep 2002, 5:18 AM
Never got to go to a big college like you blokes. Maybe I'm better for it. Who knows. I should read some cromwell. Ireland has been calling me for years.(i'dbetter go soon) Ports are heavy but go well with tiramisu. I like parrano myself. Great content good beat.8
on You don't know me by toredikt 25 Sep 2002, 5:08 AM
Yes, yes. s-4,L6 lose the"a". 8
on The Sands Of Time by squall1leonheart 24 Sep 2002, 5:58 PM
Work on your spelling a little. Work downpage a little too, please.
Sands of time is an excellent subject.I hope you're not really that sad at 11 yrs. Welcome to the pool.8
on We Poor Rise by Wulf 24 Sep 2002, 4:50 PM
Screw flow! CONTENT CONTENT CONTENT! 9
replying on The Masonic Underling & the 33 degree by horus8 24 Sep 2002, 4:19 PM
I don't know if I'm gonna get more from the poetry side of this forum, or the humor side. But I definitely agree with the patterns statement. RULES!?? WE DON'T NEED NO STINKING RULES!!!!
HAIKUUUUUUS AWAY!!!!
on The Masonic Underling & the 33 degree by horus8 24 Sep 2002, 1:31 PM
I smell an affair, but I don't understand the mechanics of Haiku.8 Can someone break Haiku down for me?I'd like to try one on for size.
on Taffy by knickytoy 24 Sep 2002, 1:00 PM
Nice depth without losing the reader. Personally,leave it alone.8
on Since The Fall by harrytuttle 24 Sep 2002, 12:57 PM
Business relationship gone sour? Cool though.7
replying on Morning conflict by INTRANSIT 24 Sep 2002, 12:46 PM
Thank you one! Thank you all! I am understood and I know what I'm looking for. See you all in 5 with more:)
on Wind Elemental by DreamMachine 24 Sep 2002, 5:32 AM
Is the writer high on something? Or are they wishing they were elsewhere.Either way good.9
on Triangle of the Courtyard Square by OneFingerAnswer 24 Sep 2002, 5:24 AM
I tire of pain and misery so I read pieces too fast. I missed the (he) and therefore missed the triangle. But a fascinating view!8
on happy hour by Limness 24 Sep 2002, 5:14 AM
Well, so much for writing about the 9-5 crowd. Covered it better than I might've.9
replying on Married by INTRANSIT 23 Sep 2002, 9:31 PM
Good point.
on When The Iron Curtain Came Down by RoseEyes 23 Sep 2002, 9:28 PM
You are deeper than I. What is wrong with this system?!!! Iknow I scored you a 7!!!!
replying on Married by INTRANSIT 23 Sep 2002, 9:24 PM
OK I think you hit the mark. Maybe I should have said "tether with love". Yes? No? Throw it out the dou?
replying on Married by INTRANSIT 23 Sep 2002, 8:44 PM
OUCH! I thought it had plenty of depth. Was I too vague maybe?
'Course I can't please every one. Thanks for the input:)
replying on Married by INTRANSIT 23 Sep 2002, 6:51 PM
Yeah, I'm a sucker for simplicity, and romance. I guess we cant help who we are, right?
on Broken Tomarrow by DreamMachine 23 Sep 2002, 6:37 PM
POW-ER-FUL. Assuming spelling is purposeful,10
on Spanish fLie by flatliner 23 Sep 2002, 3:50 PM
Thanks zin, I was just kicking myself for not staying in spanish in H.S. It does seem to flow though.7