on Just For Today by apples_tim
27 Sep 2002, 4:22 AM
Simply put. I can dig it.9
on West Sands, late afternoon in winter by Nicholas Jones
27 Sep 2002, 4:17 AM
If more people would "jump in after themselves",they'd be a lot happier. Bravo.
on Transfixed (#2) by Christof
27 Sep 2002, 4:08 AM
Since I've been on this site I've gotten better at studying others' work.This is really good. ditto.
on RunOnSentence by harrytuttle
27 Sep 2002, 4:01 AM
I was going to agree with GW but then I pictured the horse and I couldn't think of anything better.A horse doesn't "jet", that would be gross. I like it as is.9
on that time my friend slipped me a speedball by unknown
26 Sep 2002, 1:21 PM
Is your friend polish? Hilarious!9
Any thing that makes me laugh gets high marks. Ishould try "medicating".
Any thing that makes me laugh gets high marks. Ishould try "medicating".
on A Time for More War by dougsoderstrom
26 Sep 2002, 12:51 PM
DO YOU MIND?!!!!! I'm trying to enjoy my last hunnert or so minutes before I have to leave.....
on American Poem by ASTRO-GLIDE
26 Sep 2002, 9:47 AM
GLIDE ON BROTHER!!!!!!!
on Conversations with a Clock II by morffrom
26 Sep 2002, 9:45 AM
What would happen if you changed the last line to "trick"? Too fun!
Glad not every one is so serious.
Glad not every one is so serious.
on Nocturne by w~* ATHENA *~w
26 Sep 2002, 5:19 AM
Soul nomad. Beautiful.
on Fraternity by Christof
26 Sep 2002, 5:15 AM
Thats funny! I really was feeling a war. Then that door-thing spun me good. Fun. I see the pattern too.Thanks for teaching me.
on The Writing Life #2 by poetandknowit
25 Sep 2002, 8:45 PM
Good flow! Nailed the 5-7-5! What season is it?
on Noblesse Oblige by Christof
25 Sep 2002, 7:10 PM
I hope you get to this comment.
I've got Isaac Hayes playing and I read it again. I saw it. wow.
I've got Isaac Hayes playing and I read it again. I saw it. wow.
on WHY by adrenalize
25 Sep 2002, 7:03 PM
Def-Leppard fan? Wouldn't change much,can't find where.....7
on Life Of Sorrow by squall1leonheart
25 Sep 2002, 4:48 PM
Yes, line breaks. Another good topic. Take heart, you're not like them if you're asking "why". Keep trying but...BREATHE!
on Rescue 911 by searching
25 Sep 2002, 3:23 PM
Imagine all the pain and suffering that will dissipate when people listen to their own hearts instead of"society". Ifind no flaws.10
on myself by decadentlaurel
25 Sep 2002, 5:31 AM
The openness is what makes this work for me.7 Know this: Only you can set yoursel free!
on WLPAN by Nicholas Jones
25 Sep 2002, 5:27 AM
Blew my wad on your other poem, liked this one too.8