on some deleted poem
19 Dec 2005, 12:37 AM
perhaps a skin graft would help?
on Lost Identity by TLRufener
19 Dec 2005, 12:14 AM
Wow!! Well done.
on I love to see the sunrise by amanda_dcosta
19 Dec 2005, 12:17 AM
How do you have time to see the sunrise between waking your children? I see that you draw inspiration from your life, I'm glad to see that your life is inspirational.
on Blah Blah by Blindpoetry
19 Dec 2005, 12:22 AM
Your originality is refreshing in this world of mediocrity.
on The Cowardice of Francis Evans by Caducus
19 Dec 2005, 12:28 AM
I liked the imagery, And I actually pictured hoarfrost in the first stanza.
on After the Storm by somemorepoetry
19 Dec 2005, 12:31 AM
Why the morbidity? It was going so well.
on Tulips and Roses by Mona Lisa
23 Dec 2005, 1:03 AM
What does a gown of lashes have to do with Venus orbiting the Earth, Plus the other unity issues previously mentioned. Don't give up on it, just consider new alternatives.I didn't like hearing cotton twice, consider woolen womb maybe?
on Never Let Go Again by TLRufener
23 Dec 2005, 1:06 AM
Obviously a whoopsy-Daisy of a day, Keep it on the bright side.
on Temptation by PoeticXTC
23 Dec 2005, 1:12 AM
A worthy temptation for such a fall I imagine.
on Engine Braking by INTRANSIT
14 Dec 2007, 10:16 PM
Then the air brakes
Staining to hold the load
As the curve looms
Incidius asphalt
Dying to kill
Hot brakes
Nothing but a jake
Standing between me and death
Untill salvation arises
A sign
Runaway ramp ahead
Fuck it
The altenative is death
Staining to hold the load
As the curve looms
Incidius asphalt
Dying to kill
Hot brakes
Nothing but a jake
Standing between me and death
Untill salvation arises
A sign
Runaway ramp ahead
Fuck it
The altenative is death
on some deleted poem
29 Nov 2007, 8:17 PM
Again,I must say. Well done!
This should be in the top ten
This should be in the top ten
on Some poems by INTRANSIT
12 Nov 2007, 6:00 PM
Well done INTRANSIT, Well done. I can certainly relate to the I.C.U. part. Another well deserved ten for you. I haven't been around for a while but if time permits I'll read a few more of yours.
on INTELLIGENCIA by INTRANSIT
12 Nov 2007, 6:09 PM
As we think ourselves into a mellenial grave eh?
on Turning British by INTRANSIT
12 Nov 2007, 6:13 PM
What's next? Irish pub slush?
on Who's on First? by Melanie Jade
12 Nov 2007, 6:23 PM
Sound like you got a good batch of l.s.d.
on Gladly For Love by sliver
4 Feb 2009, 10:50 PM
I know it's cheesy, but what's so wrong with that verse in particular?
on To Michelle by ALChemy
4 Feb 2009, 11:11 PM
I am baffled yet again, that's why I saved this to my fav's. Stupendous, genious, a piece of art.
on PHOTO by madamefrufru
16 Jul 2009, 1:28 PM
I can picture her there, in the casket,
How sad that you only retained a sliver.
How sad that you only retained a sliver.