on After A Love is Lost by pinay_miss_azn
30 Jun 2005, 10:34 PM
When I first started reading this I wanted to tell you that the pain will subside... Scars are just something to brag about in a way.
on You and I by pinay_miss_azn
30 Jun 2005, 10:38 PM
So few really look in the eyes, it's always something else.Yet blue eyes can be a harbour for a lost soul.
on All Alone by pinay_miss_azn
30 Jun 2005, 10:40 PM
This one doesn't seem to hold your essence like the last two of yours I've read, something's missing.
on some deleted poem
30 Jun 2005, 11:06 PM
Oh, my, but haven't we been a busy boy with our new rating system. 0's all around. Yes chuck, I'd like to buy a ZERO. Do you suppose that's a bit harsh? really when you consider it, hell man, who are you to crush these smouldering dreams into ash, at least let them snuff themselves out with a woebegotten two. eh?I kept paging back on your voting history... Damn, man, you've crushed alot of spirit.
on No More Autumn Poems (Edit) by Sasha
21 Aug 2005, 11:54 PM
A vivid picture, I felt it all the way through.I've tried three times tonight, just can't write. Sooo, this is what I would do with this. If you like all or any, welcome.
What voice could sing in joy of death
Each leaf as it withers and dies
fluttering down to mingle with the soil
keeping it's host alive.
this fitting requiem
What voice could sing in joy of death
Each leaf as it withers and dies
fluttering down to mingle with the soil
keeping it's host alive.
this fitting requiem
on Tonightâs Halloween by TLRufener
12 Oct 2005, 12:04 AM
Hello friend, still at it I see. Doing well.
on Hell is spring by INTRANSIT
12 Oct 2005, 12:07 AM
I don't know about you, but I spent all day shoveling 6' snow drifts. SPRING? Not in Peyton Colorado,
on some deleted poem
12 Oct 2005, 12:14 AM
I would also like to get in my *10*cents
on Better Off Dead by wilco
7 Dec 2005, 7:06 PM
But why pick that particular ending? Especially touching for me because it reaches into some not so distant memories of mine and wrings them out a bit.
I likey.
I likey.
on Jesus, you I see by amanda_dcosta
7 Dec 2005, 7:20 PM
A good way to live life.Knowing God is watching has a tendency to keep you honest.
on i dream in nine minute increments by ay deee
7 Dec 2005, 7:56 PM
It's funny, lately my dreams have been lasting a lifetime. Long story. Now is not the time.
I especially liked the first stanza.
I especially liked the first stanza.
on Bri's Room (not done) by Sunshine Conkey
11 Dec 2005, 9:37 PM
Had an awful lot of stuff.
on Mixed Quartet by Dovina
19 Dec 2005, 12:01 AM
A carol for the masses eh?
on To Michelle by ALChemy
19 Dec 2005, 12:04 AM
This smacks of Poe, beautifully done, time well spent.
May she rest in peace.
May she rest in peace.
on My kids by amanda_dcosta
19 Dec 2005, 12:08 AM
It didn't seem to smooth out until about a third of the way through, maybe it's just me.
on Do Something by Miggy
19 Dec 2005, 12:10 AM
A fine dream, but not within our nature I fear.
on to move foward by ay deee
19 Dec 2005, 12:12 AM
At least there's that.
on You Have It Backwards by LilMsLadyPoet
16 Dec 2005, 9:28 AM
I guess you can call essays poetry now huh? I don't know, you see, I'm porr also.
on Bri's Room (not done) by Sunshine Conkey
18 Dec 2005, 11:48 PM
There is still room for improvement, as with everything.
on Returning Home by Niphredil
19 Dec 2005, 12:13 AM
I often feel the same way, but not so eloquently.