on FREAKIN by celticskatermatt1
28 Apr 2005, 7:52 PM
Only because you misspelled cello
on some deleted poem
25 Apr 2005, 1:45 PM
CAn he brew me a cure for gout? This sucks.
How's it been goin, Old man?
How's it been goin, Old man?
on Untitled by http://mulberryfairy
28 Apr 2005, 7:50 PM
And with that he's gone. Now you're changing sides?
on some deleted poem
28 Apr 2005, 12:31 PM
It's funny how everyone seems to know what your needs are more than you do. I can see people cringe when they think I am going to recite one of my poems. Friends, family, it doesn't matter. I guess that's why most of us are here, looking for acceptance.
on some deleted poem
28 Apr 2005, 12:41 PM
I'm glad you wrote in that last stanza, I was going to chew you out! Nice prayer. Why don't you move next to me so I can be that neighbor who's prayers are answered.
on The promise by thepinkbunnyofdoom
28 Apr 2005, 7:54 PM
The first stanza reminds me of my friend Skip, "Stay out of my mind, there's things in there i don't want you to know." Good visuals.
on Hanging Gallows by Hadasl
28 Apr 2005, 7:57 PM
What does Zodiac know? I like it.
on The Resilient Woman by Joe-joe
28 Apr 2005, 8:02 PM
What is a ship? Alex
on Wherever the Wind Will Blow by nothingtoanyone
29 Apr 2005, 3:14 PM
did you mean relinquish? also wherever is one word, and nature's. grammer and punctuation is important for a writer, yes?
on Just a Poem by Damien
29 Apr 2005, 3:17 PM
A well made point, even if it did sound a bit forced.
on Sins of convenience by sunset sky
29 Apr 2005, 3:20 PM
Damn, such violent tendencies in a poet, whatever shall we do?
on The Instructor by Alizarin_Crimson
2 May 2005, 9:30 PM
Well, hello. Nice to meet you. I just finished losing myself into a very blue canvas,really. I have only two words for you. Damn... Wow.
on The Instructor by Alizarin_Crimson
2 May 2005, 9:31 PM
BTW, Did he convert her?
on some deleted poem
26 May 2005, 9:19 PM
I really can't tell you how much I like this. Vivid, I think, is the word for the way this struck me. A painting of both light and dark. Inspiring.
on Inspiration from absurdity by INTRANSIT
26 May 2005, 8:45 PM
I think perhaps the coroner would be better suited to clean up this mess.
on Lower than low by nicole081083
26 May 2005, 8:48 PM
I would say 'that heaven let me in' in the first stanza. See how it flows better that way? A few other spots that seem to bog down a bit. A positive message, but I think you need repentance, also, for that forgiveness.
on A backsliders struggle by nicole081083
26 May 2005, 8:51 PM
I really liked this, mostly because it sounds like something I would have written.I especially like the part about forgetting your song. superb..
on some deleted poem
19 Jun 2005, 9:31 PM
So, why would you feel the need to mark all of my poems with a zero? It just seems out of charachter for you old timer. Really, I want to know!