on I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike
15 Aug 2003, 9:08 PM
You forgot to add me to your list. I've rhymed Heart/apart etc. but we all grow
on some deleted poem
18 Aug 2003, 7:47 PM
Yes that's right
on I Love You by jude
15 Aug 2003, 3:11 PM
Sappy and broken
on some deleted poem
21 Aug 2003, 8:40 PM
You should never try to fit into the mold someone else sees you in. I'm glad to hear you broke up with him. If you didn't feel a compensation for your feelings, then he didn't care to try. By the way, how old are you?
on Women have Babies and Men Murder. by horus8
21 Aug 2003, 8:46 PM
Try putting your points in your slits and slots and quit writing about your sister. This sucked
on A ballerina bubble bath by horus8
18 Aug 2003, 7:44 PM
You know what the difference is between this submission and a bucket of shit? The bucket buddy. But keep trying, I enjoy a good laugh
on The truth about our friend Horus by Sir.Psycho.Sexy
15 Aug 2003, 2:35 PM
I think the Kings Men better watch their backs
on knott's berry farm, jam & polaroids by <{Baba^Yaga}>
15 Aug 2003, 5:55 PM
I can honestly say CRAP, Thanks anyway. Way the by- are you mom or grandma?
on some deleted poem
15 Aug 2003, 5:56 PM
There's a reason I didn't like algebra-Congratulations, you found it.
on some deleted poem
15 Aug 2003, 5:57 PM
The title works very well. you wasted alot of time on this
on some deleted poem
15 Aug 2003, 8:33 PM
A beautiful prayer. well done
on some deleted poem
15 Aug 2003, 8:38 PM
If he is holding you away, even slightly why hinge your emotion on his desire? All in all though this was well written.
on some deleted poem
15 Aug 2003, 6:01 PM
Everything He did before '80 sucked too. almost as much as this crap. But not quite
on (The vinyards of Tuscany) by Patsy
15 Aug 2003, 6:03 PM
Sounds almost like Rome after Nero
on some deleted poem
15 Aug 2003, 6:06 PM
Damn I guess you didn't care about little sis huh?
So you surrender yourself to the fate you wished for her?
So you surrender yourself to the fate you wished for her?
on One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined
15 Aug 2003, 6:09 PM
Why the 's in the third stanza? You had a good flow 'till then.
on some deleted poem
15 Aug 2003, 2:18 PM
I think this was just a way to vocalize your frustrations. I like the last three words, it means you havn't given up hope. Here's a green 10 for g.w.
on some deleted poem
15 Aug 2003, 2:47 PM
This reminds me of one I heard by Poe:
We only part to meet again
Tho' mighty boundless waves may sever
Remembrance oft' shall bring thee near
And I with thee go on forever.
And oft' at midnight's silent hour
When brilliant planets shall guide the ocean
Thy name shall rise to heavens highest star
And mingle with my souls devotion
We only part to meet again
Tho' mighty boundless waves may sever
Remembrance oft' shall bring thee near
And I with thee go on forever.
And oft' at midnight's silent hour
When brilliant planets shall guide the ocean
Thy name shall rise to heavens highest star
And mingle with my souls devotion
on for sue (20030815) by nentwined
15 Aug 2003, 2:34 PM
Sounds like a real catch
on some deleted poem
31 Aug 2003, 8:31 PM
A positive piece. Well spoken and a good message