oooh k, kinda common, try to spice it up.

Much better than the other one I read. You should spend some time reading some of the stuff here, might do you good.

Some parts grabbed me much more than others, but I actually liked this a little, surprised? hell shocked me.

I enjoyed it, hallmarkey or not.

Hey Sasha, long time. I really enjoyed this one, Brings memories to mind that almost make me cry. Just what I needed after last night. Thanks.

That story should never end, then what would us simple poets write about?

They never see us 'till it's too late. I miss not being loved, but....hell, I have nothing to give but myself-and I'm not sure that's enough.

No, no I don't. But I still desire that all-encompassing love. But if I don't find it I will still love my life. If I can't find someone to give everything I am, I will give to everyone, that is the nature of the beast. Love ya babe.

Well done. WELL DONE! need I say more?

I think you should sleep on this and hit it again, it begs for more.

I don't think he's lost, just misplaced. If he holds the key to your freedom, you are going with him.

Keep fighting. It's all about how you deal with the situations you are presented with in life. And, no matter how bad it is, it's never worth suicide!

Druid? I've always been entranced by the idea of Stonehenge, So, my thoughts exactly.

Well written, this deserves a place somewhere above all the others, at least for a time. I believe you find peace in a chapel because your soul, which makes you who you are, feels more at home there than in this chaotic world. Just a thought.

YES!! Very much so. Read my poem The Message(revised).
That is my attempt to discribe camping in these beautiful rocky mountains. Kinda.I got sidetracked.

GREAT!!

Did he have to die?

Waiting for you to vote on something. Anything. Then I'll give you a vote on this.

Good message, it seems to flow well. How's life in Australia? I've always wanted to go.

Now is the time, this is the place. Welcome.