replying on Bitter bacardi makes the black stones dance. by SupremeDreamer
7 Jun 2004, 8:54 PM
That would be mine. And what was wrong with my worm?
replying on A life unsure by sliver
7 Jun 2004, 8:41 PM
Thanks, I felt a change was in order.
on The curse of language and other scattered thoughts by Y2kSlamPoet
7 Jun 2004, 8:40 PM
We don't acquire our distincion of morality by descent, but rather, by rising above our nature.
And you know that giving in to your basest desires and needs is not the way we aspire to perfection. I have found that striving to achieve pure charity is the most fulfilling thing I have ever done in my life. Like you, I don't claim to know it all, but the path has been laid out for me, I need only the courage to walk it.
And you know that giving in to your basest desires and needs is not the way we aspire to perfection. I have found that striving to achieve pure charity is the most fulfilling thing I have ever done in my life. Like you, I don't claim to know it all, but the path has been laid out for me, I need only the courage to walk it.
on Writers' Block by wilco
7 Jun 2004, 8:31 PM
Must've been hard to think up this one.
on One Week Ago by Miggy
7 Jun 2004, 8:29 PM
I could see this on the radio, Not that it's all that great(No offense), but it's better than alot of stuff I hear.
replying on Decks of Cards (So Long to the City) by wilco
6 Jun 2004, 8:09 PM
KE?
on Obituary for the Moon by wilco
6 Jun 2004, 7:55 PM
Sloppy what? Nothing I saw....10,10.
on Decks of Cards (So Long to the City) by wilco
6 Jun 2004, 7:51 PM
I'm looking forward to reading obituary to the moon. That makes it hrd to speak on this piece. I see that you are a musician. read a few af mine and let me know if I have any hope as a lyricist?
on One O Five in the A.M. by Enkidu
2 Jun 2004, 9:12 PM
This is poetry? really? don't want to hurt your feelings man, but this don't cut it, not at all. I won't vote
replying on The Babe in the Alligator Pajamas by caitydee
2 Jun 2004, 9:05 PM
Perhaps you will have one of your own someday. Myself, I can't wait.
replying on Its raining by caitydee
2 Jun 2004, 9:04 PM
Come on, it couldn't have been that bad.
on Don't Say You Understand by cuddlytiger17
2 Jun 2004, 8:55 PM
I don't understand ;)
on Fire, Water, and Blood by Katzclear
2 Jun 2004, 8:48 PM
Good imagery,I think tadpole refers to baptism. When ya gonna submit some more?
on The Babe in the Alligator Pajamas by caitydee
2 Jun 2004, 8:31 PM
Funny how children can make you completely reconsider your idea of life huh? 10
replying on The Babe in the Alligator Pajamas by caitydee
2 Jun 2004, 8:29 PM
Too bad your mother didn't use birth control, then every poem I have wouldn't have zero's from Hoarus, Baby yoga, Jerimiah handfloss, etc. It's nice how all ten of your personalities are all full of shit.
replying on Its raining by caitydee
2 Jun 2004, 8:25 PM
Can't remember it, I'm sure it was just me saying something nice. By the way, it's sliver, not silver.
on Sisters of mercy by titan69
2 Jun 2004, 3:26 PM
They walked as if robotic? seems to fit better.
on The Trainspotter by the codeine kid
2 Jun 2004, 3:23 PM
I guess my life isn't that boring then.