regarding some deleted poem...	15-Oct-02/11:33 AM
the last 8 lines are very nice. the beginning could be a little smoother. there's something about it that chunks along a little too clunkily.
Re: song of the birds by rainbow	9-Oct-02/11:26 AM
something tells me the hawk isn't in pain but is announcing to his buddies that you're going to be dinner. you have "the" twice in the second stanza.
Re: The First Poem by jrtails	9-Oct-02/10:35 AM
LukeHanney might be paranoid and overzealous, but this works nicely. it's nice when something catches you off guard with its
Re: Midnight Dream by Katie	7-Oct-02/8:25 AM
Naughty, naughty! Do your parents know you do this in the dark corners of your bedroom at night after they've gone to sleep?
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Oct-02/9:05 AM
there's something funny about this, yet truly idiotic. i guess the 2 go hand in hand at times. get rid of the first stanza and this will be better. "that's cabbage for you" is a classic line.
Re: Snack for the Shameless by New Life Drug	9-Oct-02/10:37 AM
the title is the best part. i thought it was going to have something to do with