on God's Angels by _iamtwilight_
21 Feb 2004, 4:03 AM
Good... I like it!
on Inevitable by _iamtwilight_
21 Feb 2004, 4:01 AM
Not bad...
on A Dream by DarkThirteens
21 Feb 2004, 3:59 AM
It´s okey, but....
on Troubled Mind by DarkThirteens
21 Feb 2004, 3:58 AM
I don´t know what to say actually!
on First Shot by lastobelus
11 Feb 2004, 9:53 AM
Thank you for your comment, I can say that was better!!! But about your poetry: I can also write stories you know. You maybe think that it´s poetry, but I don´t. A little less story telling only. You can try to write a book, can´t you?
on Gardener by lastobelus
7 Feb 2004, 9:50 AM
I got to agree with you. People can write what they want, and people can comment what they want. Maybe an idea is to write what is wrong with the poem, what you don´t like. This is what kind of critic I would want, and I guess other people to. Some people are just cruel for the fun of it. And that´s not wright!
on Castaway by andrewjthomas
7 Feb 2004, 9:41 AM
I don´t know. What about you?
Even if I have personal poems, I write about my feelings. What is important to me. I really don´t care what´s important to you.
Even if I have personal poems, I write about my feelings. What is important to me. I really don´t care what´s important to you.
on La Belle Epoque by andrewjthomas
4 Feb 2004, 9:26 AM
Isn´t this a story? It´s a reason that they call a poem a poem and a story a story. Did you get that?
on Doesn't Hurt Me by Miggy
10 Oct 2002, 2:43 AM
This must be a song... you're a great songwriter... You should show somebody your talent, cause this was really great.
on Nature by Reuben Spiteri
10 Oct 2002, 2:37 AM
Good poem.... I liked it a lot...
on Essential Love by unknown
10 Oct 2002, 2:36 AM
Very good poem... you must have been in love when you wrote this?
on The Fragrance by mozac
9 Oct 2002, 1:46 PM
I have no peticulary meaning about it, I't's okey I guess.
on Deceive Me by A.S.Martin
9 Oct 2002, 1:45 PM
Okey enough... I didn't get a rythm or not a rythm, it was a little bit humpy.... but the text easn't bad at all.
on Losing Control by Tarquin De La Bog
9 Oct 2002, 3:55 AM
I know alot about poems, so if I were you, I wouldn't say something foolish, beside I'm not a child.... But I guess you are since you critize people when you don't know a damn shit about them. If I were you I'd take a minute to think about what you're saying, and a poem can't be a story, it's a reason it's called a story and not a poem.
on Dirty Pops by Tarquin De La Bog
9 Oct 2002, 3:41 AM
Oh my God, what are you to talk about good and bad poems? You don't know shit.
on Losing Control by Tarquin De La Bog
9 Oct 2002, 3:36 AM
Excuse me, but this is not a poem, it's a story. Silly isn't it? A poem is not a story.... I thought you knew that, you who knows so much, huh?
on rapping on caffeine by blackball
9 Oct 2002, 3:28 AM
I liked, it was a short poem, but it said so much.
on The right one by dngrules
9 Oct 2002, 3:22 AM
Nice poem, I guess I've felt this way myself once....
on Here In The Heart of Amber by Lenore
9 Oct 2002, 3:08 AM
Not bad... Kind of deep.... I like it