on A Sexy Crucifixion Poem by Edna Sweetlove
25 Jul 2006, 5:29 AM
Vulgar and disgusting. Awful
on Old Man by Rollsoftoiletpaper
10 Oct 2004, 1:18 PM
A mysterious, yet nice poem. We don't know who the 'Old Man' is and the repition of that phrase is very effective.
replying on A Reflective Window by lukehanney
10 Oct 2004, 12:54 PM
Well, you won't see me there. And I hope you won't end up going there either. God isn't dead, millions of people care, but you don't at the moment.
replying on A Reflective Window by lukehanney
10 Oct 2004, 12:52 PM
Yes, I agree with your comments on the last 2 lines...I'll work on an improvement. Thanks.
on (A)Gnostic by Nicholas Jones
9 Oct 2004, 3:45 PM
Nicholas Jones = Legend
Subject to the but of my poetry and took it all very well... if you don't mind Nicholas I'm working on Ode No. 4
http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.j
Subject to the but of my poetry and took it all very well... if you don't mind Nicholas I'm working on Ode No. 4
http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.j
on Clerihews (here you go, Nicholas Jones!) by Yardbird
9 Oct 2004, 3:43 PM
A very poor, and needlessly rude example of poetry. I will admit that clerihews are not known for quality, but for wit. However, this is just rude.
By the way Nicholas Jones = Legend.
By the way Nicholas Jones = Legend.
replying on Ode to Nicholas Jones by lukehanney
8 Oct 2004, 7:28 AM
Nicholas Jones, I have actually decided is now a legend. He became a subject of mine when he pointed out that all I had done for my first poem was copied song lyrics (as I jokingly did). From then on I developed a sort of fake feud with him, which is nothing personal, and he became a source for poems. I have never met him, and am sure that he is a very nice person, but his name just rolls of the tongue and is very poetic. Nicholas, if you are reading this, anything bad I have said about you has not been meant at all...you take it all very graciously, as I wouldn't. Thanks you.
on The Fox by cleverdevice
19 Jan 2004, 4:35 AM
Excellent - I am impressed
replying on Stockport by Nicholas Jones
16 May 2003, 7:56 AM
DON'T YOU DARE COMPARE YOURSELF TO THE BEATLES, YOU A FOOL AND YOU'RE POEMS DON'T EVEN RHYME
on Stockport by Nicholas Jones
16 May 2003, 7:54 AM
PATHETIC ATTEMPT AT POETRY
on Cussedness by Nicholas Jones
16 May 2003, 7:48 AM
Hmmmm...I could be a foolish yes man like most other people on this site, but at the end of the day, this poem is a pile of pointless rubbish, but then again we've come to expect no more from you, so in one way its average, in another you could just be realistsic and say 'IT'S RUBBISH'
replying on haiku's i love but i cannot do them well enough by UAFANTHORPEY
2 Dec 2002, 4:39 AM
SHUT UP NICHOLAS JONES. JUST READ THE THIRD IN THE SERIES OF ODE TO NJ
on TWO STAR WARS FANS by UAFANTHORPEY
13 Nov 2002, 2:10 AM
Very good. Funny and it rhymes
replying on Suburbia in December by Nicholas Jones
24 Oct 2002, 8:31 AM
SHUT UP WHAT ARE YOU TALJKING ABOUT. IT DOESN'T EVEN RHYME
on Suburbia in December by Nicholas Jones
24 Oct 2002, 8:31 AM
I STILL HATE YOU
THIS POEM IS UTTER RUBBISH
THIS POEM IS UTTER RUBBISH
on It's something about you by devina
10 Oct 2002, 2:08 AM
A know a song by the Beatles about Norway (Norwegian Wood...isn't it good). It seems to me that you dislike Miss Tarquin De La Bog (A.K.A Miss Tarquin Del Boy Toilet) would you like to form a sort of allinace against her with me and Nicholas Jones
Write back
Write back
on Dirty Pops by Tarquin De La Bog
10 Oct 2002, 2:06 AM
What on earth is that. I've written better poems whilst constipated on the toilet. Heres a poem for you:
Oh how I would hate to snog
The infamous Tarquin Del Boy Bog
Good isn't it...and it rhymes
Oh how I would hate to snog
The infamous Tarquin Del Boy Bog
Good isn't it...and it rhymes
replying on The First Poem by jrtails
10 Oct 2002, 12:50 AM
-ULT
on Losing Control by Tarquin De La Bog
9 Oct 2002, 6:07 AM
Excuse me Tarquin Del Boy Toilet.
I agree with devina. Stop critiscing everyone, when your poems are rubbish and don't even rhyme. Don't you have the time to make them rhyme (By the Way(by REd Hot CHili Pepers) that did rhyme)
Bye
I agree with devina. Stop critiscing everyone, when your poems are rubbish and don't even rhyme. Don't you have the time to make them rhyme (By the Way(by REd Hot CHili Pepers) that did rhyme)
Bye