on some deleted poem
7 Apr 2003, 5:00 PM
Hey life's not fair. Just strive hard, money seemingly always goes to those who don't have a need for it, or use it sensibly. Think of 3rd world countries for instance.
on A Haiku-cum-thingy (really) by Bobjim
7 Apr 2003, 5:03 PM
That's so sickening you'd make a gay person straight so they don't have to be sexually interested in this poem. Here's 0 for pissing me off in my computer class.
on some deleted poem
7 Apr 2003, 5:20 PM
Hey, i'm not a big fan of suicide, but understand at least to some extent how it comes about and how depression works. Seeing as i have written a lot of poems on suicide when i was depressed and because it helps me get it out, and also being a teen of similar mind (sometimes - i think) i'll give you a reasonable mark.
on isms and ities by Amelia
7 Apr 2003, 4:23 PM
Hey guys, she's having a major problem with line 4, do have any ideas for it? Suggestions are welcome, just don't insult the writer. Please and thankyou.
on affirmative action by thelonefrobros
7 Apr 2003, 4:35 PM
does someone have a pincer so i can pluck out my eyes?
on some deleted poem
11 Dec 2002, 9:47 AM
eyeball soup anyone?
on some deleted poem
11 Dec 2002, 9:53 AM
Oh! you used djembes!
on some deleted poem
11 Dec 2002, 9:57 AM
Could you write my wedding vows? Please? what if i throw in a little peanut butter pie(s)?
on some deleted poem
11 Dec 2002, 9:51 AM
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
a diamond tear from queen Mab's eye falls.
a diamond tear from queen Mab's eye falls.
on some deleted poem
11 Dec 2002, 10:04 AM
This is good nice twist to greek myth.
on Gilded Stumps of Olde (AN STORY THAT IS NOT AN POEME) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
11 Dec 2002, 9:44 AM
This is the shitiest, nastiest, most barbaric shit I've ever been unfortunate to lay my eyes on. You either need to get a girlfriend or a boyfriend, you're watching too much porn!!! your brain IS quite fuddled and this is the greatest level of obscene madness I've ever seen. I love it...NOT!
on Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
23 Oct 2002, 6:04 PM
This is the funniest poem I've ever read. You rock! 100%