poemranker ::20 most recent comments by ~incarnate~ and replies

Comments by~incarnate~, the 20 most recent, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on The cheating wife haiku by ~incarnate~ 23 Sep 2003, 11:16 AM
A haiku is based on an old form of Japanese poetry. It is usually a poem written in 3 lines with a rhythm of 5-7-5. I.e. 5 words on the 1st line, 7 on the second and 5 on the last. All the words in the poem are linked and are essential to the poem. There is a better explanation on this site, Kaolin fire has it somewhere under poems. Thanks. :) have a good one.
replying on alone in winter by ~incarnate~ 5 Jul 2003, 12:38 AM
Ha ha, that's what i was going for.
replying on La salle de couvée by ~incarnate~ 5 Jul 2003, 12:36 AM
Thanks man, i did
on A Haiku-cum-thingy (really) by Bobjim 7 Apr 2003, 5:03 PM
That's so sickening you'd make a gay person straight so they don't have to be sexually interested in this poem. Here's 0 for pissing me off in my computer class.
replying on The rendition 2 (at the wedding) by ~incarnate~ 7 Apr 2003, 4:54 PM
I thought he was a hobbit.
on affirmative action by thelonefrobros 7 Apr 2003, 4:35 PM
does someone have a pincer so i can pluck out my eyes?
on isms and ities by Amelia 7 Apr 2003, 4:23 PM
Hey guys, she's having a major problem with line 4, do have any ideas for it? Suggestions are welcome, just don't insult the writer. Please and thankyou.
replying on For the boyfriend I don't have by ~incarnate~ 11 Dec 2002, 1:12 PM
Thank you
replying on The rendition 2 (at the wedding) by ~incarnate~ 11 Dec 2002, 10:51 AM
Hey aren't you the one that wrote char?
replying on The rendition 2 (at the wedding) by ~incarnate~ 11 Dec 2002, 10:47 AM
Yes, the priest and I are singing to the tune of Haydn's symphony that is the second movement. If you noticed too, Tolkien's dots are in the same tune.
replying on For the boyfriend I don't have by ~incarnate~ 11 Dec 2002, 10:09 AM
thanks! And oh, yeah, I will need the luck!
on Gilded Stumps of Olde (AN STORY THAT IS NOT AN POEME) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 11 Dec 2002, 9:44 AM
This is the shitiest, nastiest, most barbaric shit I've ever been unfortunate to lay my eyes on. You either need to get a girlfriend or a boyfriend, you're watching too much porn!!! your brain IS quite fuddled and this is the greatest level of obscene madness I've ever seen. I love it...NOT!
on Career by BrandonW 1 Nov 2002, 8:07 AM
That was a typo, it's "I'm". :)
on Career by BrandonW 1 Nov 2002, 8:06 AM
Hi welcome to the madhatter's cafe. I the incarnate, nice to meet you. Nice philosophy on life cherie. Would your name be Brandon Walker perchance? if so leave a little banter for me.
on Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 23 Oct 2002, 6:04 PM
This is the funniest poem I've ever read. You rock! 100%
replying on Char by Amelia 23 Oct 2002, 5:59 PM
Wow! her poems quite nice. has a tinge of goth to it though and unexpected alliteration. fave line:white rash on black ash