on Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof
20 Mar 2003, 7:09 PM
Thoughtfully sculpted. This may not be much of a compliment, but I believe it's better than any of mine.
on My Friend? by Blade
6 Nov 2002, 11:01 PM
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on The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
9 Nov 2002, 12:30 AM
Good funny truth.
on Ode to a Pizza Hut Roach by http://mulberryfairy
27 Jul 2003, 11:49 AM
The Orkin man's Dna will long be gone before "Mamaroach" finishes her crouton.
Don't he know what spraying poisen can do
To him, to us, to me and you?
Silly contract killers.
Dan garcia-Black "Son of Roachmama"
Don't he know what spraying poisen can do
To him, to us, to me and you?
Silly contract killers.
Dan garcia-Black "Son of Roachmama"
on some deleted poem
22 Jul 2003, 12:20 PM
Just when I think I can't stand to read another Haiku, something like this pops up. Great image.
on some deleted poem
22 Jul 2003, 12:20 PM
Just when I think I can't stand to read another Haiku, something like this pops up. Great image.
on some deleted poem
18 Mar 2003, 9:03 AM
Kid's think they know what's best for everybody. Kid's have no common sense. Kid's can put themselves and everyone around them in danger. Damn! I guess politicians are kids. Great poem. It resonates on way too many levels (perhaps even the level on which it was written). Love it's redemption qualities.
on a poet in the city by Bill Z Bub
14 Mar 2003, 8:30 AM
Good execution of the subject.
on some deleted poem
29 Nov 2002, 7:56 PM
Yummy! The makin's of hot dogs. Just add mustard and it's 4th of July picnic fare. Good.
on some deleted poem
11 Nov 2002, 10:21 AM
Love the second verse.
I, too, have felt like the nada in the nada of heaven. Defintely struck an A=440 within me.
I, too, have felt like the nada in the nada of heaven. Defintely struck an A=440 within me.
on Horse Burgers by flanners
11 Nov 2002, 10:25 AM
Unclear to me if this is a description of your interaction with your muse (Mist & misery). Is this about your writing process?
on Monday by betty swallox
11 Nov 2002, 10:27 AM
I think I work there, too.
on The heart of self destruction by Roisin
9 Nov 2002, 12:16 AM
Fine imagery. What you mean to say is understood without the (by you).
Been on both sides of this one. Painful but real.
Been on both sides of this one. Painful but real.
on some deleted poem
9 Nov 2002, 12:25 AM
A kitty picture in words. Lovely.
Done in less than 1000. This time these few words are worth the entire picture.
Done in less than 1000. This time these few words are worth the entire picture.
on some deleted poem
7 Nov 2002, 11:18 PM
A beautiful poem about what we all do. We observe, digest and regurgitate art that shows us those wonderful moments of reality we sometimes miss..
on some deleted poem
7 Nov 2002, 8:31 AM
That really says it well. Great images. Might be helped by an Ezra Pound editing approach. Shorter can be better.
on AIDS in a Glass by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
7 Nov 2002, 8:40 AM
Limericks usually make me laugh.
I did. But I felt very, very guilty afterwards. It has also made me wary of drinking from a glarse. I will be drinking from the toilet bowl with a straw from now on.
I did. But I felt very, very guilty afterwards. It has also made me wary of drinking from a glarse. I will be drinking from the toilet bowl with a straw from now on.
on some deleted poem
22 Dec 2002, 8:41 AM
Good but could use a more lovable protagonist.