poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Dan garcia-Black (101-120) and replies

Comments byDan garcia-Black, 101–120 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on Poetic Profit by Dovina 4 Jan 2005, 7:43 AM
Who did that one?
on What I Do Know by PsydewaysTears 3 Jan 2005, 8:17 PM
Ah! There's nothing like getting your little head to pop one off first thing in the morning to let you know you're still alive.
on Poetic Profit by Dovina 3 Jan 2005, 8:13 PM
Hey, I like this guy. He and I could sing a couple of good old country songs togther. "He Stopped Loving Her Today," "Didn't Know God Made Honky Tonk Angels" and the like. Was he drinking an American Brew? I prefer a dark beer myself with plenty of salty nuts.
on Math Poem 3 by Dovina 2 Jan 2005, 7:19 AM
I'm sorry, Miss Dovina. The dog ate my math homework.
replying on Math Poem 2 by Dovina 31 Dec 2004, 8:31 AM
Will there be a Math Poem 3? I can hardly wait to find out if 3=1+1+1 or if 3=cute+more cuter+most cutest.
Actually, the only math I understand is the bills and paycheck in my hand=0.
I'm going to pawn my bass today so I can buy a bottle of Andre's Champagne for tonight's midnight toast. Happy New Year!!!
replying on Math Poem 2 by Dovina 30 Dec 2004, 7:28 PM
It's even more cuter as Math 2.
on My Wife by Dovina 30 Dec 2004, 9:03 AM
Love stanza two.
on Math Poem 2 by Dovina 26 Dec 2004, 5:50 PM
cuter
on Pinhole by Dovina 18 Dec 2004, 6:54 PM
I see where you're going with this poem. I think you could do better if you would rewrite the last two stanzas. You should let go of the uncertainty in the 4th stanza and wrap it up positively in the 5th. So, 'til then a -9- not a -10-.
on Forsaken Love by Blue Magpie 15 Dec 2004, 7:40 AM
It rhymes, huh?
on exercise by JoyLuck 15 Dec 2004, 7:34 AM
If you lose the last line, it does paint a picture.

My roomate's ex girlfriend tried to come on to me during a ski trip in West Virginia. She slept in my hotel room on the other bed.

My cell phone has more recent outgoing calls than incoming. My buddy list is filled with people I do not know.
on Better Sex by Dovina 15 Dec 2004, 7:28 AM
You are a good girl and should submit this poem to Junior Scholastic Magazine.
on You and Me at Boulder Lake by jessicazee 14 Dec 2004, 8:57 AM
Haven't been camping for 40 years but this resonates. It is one of 'those' moments that can happen anywhere when you are with 'that' person. Here in LA it could happen at the Mark Taper, in S.F at 'the baths' or in Texas at a barbeque. It needs a bit of tightening to be a -10-.
on Peptalk in the Dugout by Dovina 13 Dec 2004, 8:58 AM
After watching a baseball game or two, I thought that at the beginning of the action the empire shouted, "Play Balls!" So the players aren't supposed to...uh...you know?
On a completely different subject I discovered a cool 'x' on the lower right-hand corner of the comment box. You can delete comments made by annoying asstrological signers by left-clicking the 'x.' It is part of the "freedom of speech" philosophy on poemranker. You have the right to say anything you want to me in comments. I have the right to delete comments. "America, what a country!" J. Smirnoff

on I Have... by SupremeDreamer 12 Dec 2004, 5:45 AM
Preaching to the choir-Amen.
Ditto
on Limbs by Dovina 10 Dec 2004, 8:50 AM
Are you the lightning, the oak or the result of the meeting of the two? I like being the moss on the North side never seeing the sun. The lightning was bright. It was fun to watch.
on Love by RION12 10 Dec 2004, 8:36 AM
Love is a dog from hell- Charles Bukowski.
Love is a live dog in a Korean kitchen (non-existent)-Dan garcia-Black
on Recognition by nentwined 7 Dec 2004, 8:00 AM
Makes me want to stand up in a room full of poets and say, "Hi. My name is Dan. I'm a poem-holic."
replying on The Rockets’ Song by Dovina 6 Dec 2004, 10:37 AM
Yes.