poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Dan garcia-Black

Comments byDan garcia-Black, the 20 most recent. Include replies

on Kill Criminals In The Name Of JESUS! by Sing4Jesus! 24 Oct 2006, 6:30 AM
This is a suicide note, right?
on look upon my works by nentwined 26 Apr 2008, 12:33 AM
Quote the maven, "Nevermore!"
on in this bus terminal of the future by nentwined 30 Jun 2008, 8:31 AM
Even better on the 2nd read.
on People write funny things by Garrett S Sexton 26 Apr 2008, 12:38 AM
Puddles of bloody poodles could be a follow-up.
on Love doesn't cure IV injections of hate. by SupremeDreamer 31 May 2008, 2:44 PM
Are you fucking my wife? Of course not, it's just that the mood of this poem is familiar.
on wam bam by malpaso 26 Apr 2008, 12:29 AM
Are you calling the USA a bottom?
Vaseline (another petroleum product)will break the condom. Better to use butt-er.
on On Youth Revisited by vulcan 26 Apr 2008, 12:23 AM
My new face is...younger than before...a chaos
Of Nightingales and flow'rs.
Yeah. Works for me.
on Descartes' Immortal Truth by Edna Sweetlove 23 May 2006, 10:44 AM
This poem is excellent but for one fact. The dead will have, on occasion, a bowel movement after bacteria and gas have their way with food left in stomach and intestines. So, one may shit and not be. Sorry.
on The Calling by PoeticXTC 25 Dec 2005, 1:49 PM
They saw his light.
That star; he smiles, he’s going home
Father calls
That star, he smiles, “I’m on my way”.
Happy Kwanza
on why? by nentwined 26 Dec 2005, 7:18 PM
A good pimple but for a great pimple the end has to be about "Her."
How about?
"outweighed by You, you fat-assed, blood-sucking, faithless whore! But I will take you back,
if you ask." That's a pimple '10.'
on Hoi Polloi by INTRANSIT 26 Dec 2005, 7:22 PM
U a gynecologist, T?
on Runaway by Cairsten 29 Dec 2005, 10:13 AM
Tastes good...yeah.
on Flood Land, East Kentucky by zodiac 11 Sep 2006, 9:36 AM
"old bottles that the river brung" and "all this from in the house, but it was not of us," sucked me under the house with the rest of the junk. You really are a poet, Damn You!
on Death Beseech You by polaroidmemory 27 Mar 2007, 10:44 AM
-7- For humor.
on More and more Shuushin by mr cunt 11 Mar 2007, 11:14 AM
I agree hole(as in cunt)-heartedly. Youse a dynamic IP. I get shocks from thos statics.
PS- Try nihsuuhS and comment sdrawkcab.
on i feel so cold by minty871 11 Mar 2007, 11:07 AM
You might want to make a left on Valentine's day and find some body to keep you warm.
on some deleted poem 11 Mar 2007, 11:03 AM
Hai-verse? Free-ku?
on some deleted poem 21 Aug 2007, 11:52 AM
Why should you give a fuck about Hank? Or, for that matter, Ginsberg, Frost, Sandberg and Homer? They own the past. You should own the future.
on you've returned i'm glad by richa 21 Aug 2007, 11:58 AM
I can see this poem is not about the return of your mind.
on some deleted poem 26 Dec 2008, 10:43 PM
Thanks for the read and the critique, In.
You are spot on!