on Axe Murderer by Blindproject217
18 Apr 2003, 1:15 AM
Nice effort at a haiku at the end.
on Hazy days by cleverdevice
18 Apr 2003, 12:54 AM
Must agree with Fear of Garbage here, but other than that it's great!
on What Hobbit songs are really like... by Bobjim
14 Apr 2003, 8:53 AM
I believe that you have just attained your highest score yet!
on some deleted poem
18 Apr 2003, 12:52 AM
Aha!!! Originality at it's most beautiful!
on some deleted poem
18 Apr 2003, 1:27 PM
Possibly your greatest work of them all!
Did you measure it just perfectly so that it fits smack bang at the top and bottom of my screen? I think that for that stroke of genius you deserve a ten.
Did you measure it just perfectly so that it fits smack bang at the top and bottom of my screen? I think that for that stroke of genius you deserve a ten.
on "Mute nostril agony" Titled & inspired by Frass. by Bachus
17 Apr 2003, 11:36 PM
Fabulous, absolutely wonderful! "That pointed non fruit for lunch".
Only problem is 'apologise' (only 1 p)
Have a good day.
8
Only problem is 'apologise' (only 1 p)
Have a good day.
8
on Toute ma Vie by talking_goldfish
17 Apr 2003, 11:29 PM
Indeed. Has anyone ever had to listen to hours of contemporary French music before? It's hell.
8 I think.
8 I think.
on some deleted poem
17 Apr 2003, 11:33 PM
Beautiful as far as it goes but I feel it needs more. I also don't know who Jordan actually is, although it might have been intended that way, I think that you need to explain him/her a little more clearly.
Very nice anyway. 8
Very nice anyway. 8
on Dear flatulance (dear lord) by Bobjim
14 Apr 2003, 8:51 AM
I would have given this a ten but...oh, no I wouldn't.
on some deleted poem
14 Apr 2003, 11:00 AM
I think that line 9 should go "one thing", it flows better. Also put "At the dentist's" at the end of the line before and keep "or appendicitis" seperate. Finally I would suggest that the final comma should be three dots instead (maybe for dramatic effect).
Hey ho, we all have our problems with love but you express them much better than most. Nice work. 8
Hey ho, we all have our problems with love but you express them much better than most. Nice work. 8
on some deleted poem
14 Apr 2003, 11:06 AM
Are you ever going to resubmit the Fox and the Unix user?
on deleted scenes by Bill Z Bub
9 Apr 2003, 11:26 AM
You are the man, Bill.
on some deleted poem
9 Apr 2003, 11:32 AM
I wrote a poem about spring rolls and very few people liked it. I think food is probably a poor subject to write about on this site.
on Love Greased by Jeremi B. Handrinos
9 Apr 2003, 11:24 AM
Excellent poem. For some reason I can't get the image of exploding heroes out of my head...
on Company 11 (a friendly fire agency) by <{Baba^Yaga}>
9 Apr 2003, 11:31 AM
Interesting, certainly. Funny to a very limited extent. Um, check some of the rhyme. Probably a 7 for now.
on The Portal by geewhiz1962
9 Apr 2003, 11:35 AM
Well this really confused me, I don't know about everyone else but I believe that it needs to be clearer. I really liked the images though. I'll give it an 8, that should make up for the fact that nobody else has read it yet. Nice effort.
on some deleted poem
14 Apr 2003, 11:04 AM
Interesting, certainly...
on Where's heaven? by cleverdevice
18 Apr 2003, 12:51 AM
Fantastic!
on some deleted poem
18 Apr 2003, 12:24 AM
Ah! This is one of your best poems GW and I will give it a ten.