poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Ranger (1321-1340)

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on some deleted poem 7 Jan 2003, 2:09 AM
Precisely.
Does 'fire' have one syllable or two? Fy-yur or Fire?
on The bouchon by Bachus 7 Jan 2003, 1:02 AM
Ho ho hum ho heh.
8 for the laugh.
on My buttocks are on fire. by Bobjim the II 7 Jan 2003, 1:05 AM
This one's for you, Bobjim.
0
on some deleted poem 7 Jan 2003, 1:48 AM
Exactly.
on some deleted poem 8 Jan 2003, 12:47 AM
SETTLE! YOU'RE BACK!
(what about your back?)
on The French Shark by -=SeTTle=- 8 Jan 2003, 12:50 AM
Hur hur hee hee. What a fabulous picture...mon dick...mon dieu...heh heh...have a 9 for making me laugh.
This isn't by any chance related to cleverdevice's shark, now, is it?
on The poet by Mikius 7 Jan 2003, 1:44 AM
Nice, perhaps the bit where "something happens" could be emphasised a bit more straight away. Or maybe it's better as it is. I like it. 8
on Morning on Galapados by Mikius 7 Jan 2003, 1:46 AM
2nd to last verse is excellent, I like it a great deal.
Not sure about the last line, if I can think of anything better for it I'll let you know.
Only other gripe is that 'fresh' doesn't have an 'a'.
Good work
on Shit happens by Bobjim the II 7 Jan 2003, 1:47 AM
Is that to me?
Should I give him a 5? Ok.
on Compassion by Kashi 7 Jan 2003, 1:51 AM
A shitload of anonymous votes!
on inside me by cherish 7 Jan 2003, 1:52 AM
Not bad. Hits hard for a three-liner.
on Sticks and Stones Farm, Pot Luck Thursday Nights by <~> 7 Jan 2003, 2:06 AM
This is nice. However, I still can't see the difference between free verse and prose with extra spaces. Will somebody please enlighten me?!?
on Shark by cleverdevice 7 Jan 2003, 5:09 AM
Hur hur hur
*crackle* KILLER WHALE AT SIX 'O' CLOCK, REPEAT, KILLER WHALE AT SIX...AAAARRRRGGGHHHHH
on some deleted poem 7 Jan 2003, 5:12 AM
Precisely.
Who 8 sumtotal pi?
on To the memory of Leonie Rysanek by vulcan 7 Jan 2003, 5:13 AM
Yes
on some deleted poem 7 Jan 2003, 5:22 AM
Settle, we adore thee, etc etc
on It Is About by Wulf 7 Jan 2003, 1:10 AM
This is very nice, it really got to me...beautiful and sad, very sweet. 9
on some deleted poem 7 Jan 2003, 1:14 AM
Very good indeed-y. I get the feeling from this that it's more song material than pure poetry, but hey, who cares! This is tres bien. 9
Also, does anyone here listen to Ozric Tentacles? They're brilliant-the only instrumental group to inspire me lyrically...now I'm going off at a tangent, beg your pardon everybody.
Still a great poem on second read!
on some deleted poem 7 Jan 2003, 1:16 AM
Aha, the incredibly unsurprising bout of anonymous zeros.
Is Settle still with us in spirit?
Will change my vote to a ten to compensate a little.
on some deleted poem 7 Jan 2003, 1:39 AM
Nice one, like it a lot! 8