| Re: Death by dougsoderstrom |
6-Jan-03/7:54 AM |
Haiku: seventeen
syllables in three lines that
mean something useful
Quite.
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| Re: Moon and Azalea by Aidaho |
6-Jan-03/6:03 AM |
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| Re: red lorry yellow lorry by deano |
6-Jan-03/6:01 AM |
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| Re: A Man's Best Friend. by DewDrop |
6-Jan-03/6:00 AM |
Hnufhnufhnuf
Very funny...very, very funny...have 9
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| Re: a comment on Epistemology (2nd draft) by Ranger |
6-Jan-03/5:58 AM |
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| Re: Jewel by cleverdevice |
6-Jan-03/2:40 AM |
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| Re: a comment on joyriding by Bill Z Bub |
6-Jan-03/2:39 AM |
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Yar, and oim a leprechaun
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| Re: Exiting Shadows by Caducus |
6-Jan-03/2:24 AM |
Oh yes..."In a chorus of glorious choirs that strip your flesh in fires", what a line...I'll be saying that all day.
Great poem! 9
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| Re: a comment on The poemranker desk by lunar |
4-Jan-03/11:38 AM |
Ah well, want, fancy, love, you know, they're all the same yet so different it's hard to define them. Never mind.
And yes, he has many, many complex issues!
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| Re: Remember-me (an ode to those dropped off at the clinic) by Bachus |
4-Jan-03/9:54 AM |
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Very funny. Stanza 4 (especially the last line) is excellent. 9
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| Re: a comment on Epistemology (2nd draft) by Ranger |
4-Jan-03/9:37 AM |
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Okay then, fuck the votes. Pretend they don't exist. That still won't help me make this a better poem. I really want people to help me with this because it could potentially be good. If we forget the voting saga, will that encourage you to give me some suggestions?
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| Re: The poemranker desk by lunar |
4-Jan-03/8:43 AM |
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Tis mighty interesting, methinks. Must've taken a minute or two to make, so I'll give ya an 8 for effort. Do you really want Lark Angel?
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| Re: My existance by Twisted Wizard |
4-Jan-03/5:24 AM |
Not, "Do I Exist?", but "Am I Still Here?"
Alternatively, "Am I Still Pissed?"
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| Re: a comment on Mannequin (draft) by Ranger |
4-Jan-03/5:06 AM |
You learn how to draw statues, dumbfuck.
You have a thing about zero, don't you. Presumably it's the number of your IQ. Or maybe it's the amount of people who like you.
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| Re: a comment on A Short Letter by Ranger |
4-Jan-03/5:04 AM |
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Why, oh why must you nullify me?
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| Re: a comment on Frozen Angel by Ranger |
4-Jan-03/5:02 AM |
That's an unusual position, I never heard of it before. You were about to say something else at the end of your comment-a what?
I never have met a fuckup quite like you, you're very original.
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| Re: a comment on Am I Still Here? by Ranger |
4-Jan-03/4:57 AM |
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Thanks! A few people have told me they like that line.
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| Re: a comment on The North Wind by Ranger |
4-Jan-03/4:56 AM |
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The format of you is overused.
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| Re: a comment on Epistemology (2nd draft) by Ranger |
4-Jan-03/4:53 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Epistemology (2nd draft) by Ranger |
4-Jan-03/3:13 AM |
Aha, some help! Thank you, sir. Two questions:
1-How should I put the ideas from books into common experience?
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2-Surely that would just make me sound like every other poet who considers themselves 'professional'. What good would that do me? I personally prefer to try something different.
And finally, yes it does bother me that you are going to keep giving my poems a zero just because it bothers me. You're supposed to be one of the proper poets on this site. You're not. A proper poet would give helpful advice and not try to ground young writers into the dirt. Get a better attitude, for chrissakes, the way you are right now benefits nobody.
It's a shame that you will repeatedly vote zeros, I don't vote zeros on yours because that would be unethical.
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