| Re: The French Shark by -=SeTTle=- |
8-Jan-03/12:50 AM |
Hur hur hee hee. What a fabulous picture...mon dick...mon dieu...heh heh...have a 9 for making me laugh.
This isn't by any chance related to cleverdevice's shark, now, is it?
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| Re: a comment on Persephone by Lynn |
7-Jan-03/5:30 AM |
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| Re: To the memory of Leonie Rysanek by vulcan |
7-Jan-03/5:13 AM |
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| Re: Shark by cleverdevice |
7-Jan-03/5:09 AM |
Hur hur hur
*crackle* KILLER WHALE AT SIX 'O' CLOCK, REPEAT, KILLER WHALE AT SIX...AAAARRRRGGGHHHHH
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| Re: a comment on Daywalker by Blade |
7-Jan-03/2:34 AM |
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I've known Blade for 5 years...he referred me to this site...I see him every day at college...he's one of my best friends...I shattered his porcelain fangs and replaced them with chewing gum...I've voted 0 for all of his poems...how much more do you need to know?
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| Re: Sticks and Stones Farm, Pot Luck Thursday Nights by <~> |
7-Jan-03/2:06 AM |
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This is nice. However, I still can't see the difference between free verse and prose with extra spaces. Will somebody please enlighten me?!?
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| Re: inside me by cherish |
7-Jan-03/1:52 AM |
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Not bad. Hits hard for a three-liner.
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| Re: Compassion by Kashi |
7-Jan-03/1:51 AM |
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A shitload of anonymous votes!
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| Re: Shit happens by Bobjim the II |
7-Jan-03/1:47 AM |
Is that to me?
Should I give him a 5? Ok.
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| Re: Morning on Galapados by Mikius |
7-Jan-03/1:46 AM |
2nd to last verse is excellent, I like it a great deal.
Not sure about the last line, if I can think of anything better for it I'll let you know.
Only other gripe is that 'fresh' doesn't have an 'a'.
Good work
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| Re: The poet by Mikius |
7-Jan-03/1:44 AM |
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Nice, perhaps the bit where "something happens" could be emphasised a bit more straight away. Or maybe it's better as it is. I like it. 8
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| Re: It Is About by Wulf |
7-Jan-03/1:10 AM |
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This is very nice, it really got to me...beautiful and sad, very sweet. 9
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| Re: My buttocks are on fire. by Bobjim the II |
7-Jan-03/1:05 AM |
This one's for you, Bobjim.
0
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| Re: a comment on I love kiddies by Bobjim |
7-Jan-03/1:04 AM |
4!!??!! How can you give this four? Arrgghh, this deserves less than zero...but sadly minus fifteen doesn't exist as a vote...this should take its rightful place in the bottom.
0. And a more emphatic ZERO!
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| Re: The bouchon by Bachus |
7-Jan-03/1:02 AM |
Ho ho hum ho heh.
8 for the laugh.
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| Re: Shit happens by Bobjim the II |
7-Jan-03/1:00 AM |
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| Re: My sad life by Bobjim the II |
7-Jan-03/12:55 AM |
Hnur hnur hnur.
You missed the bit where you fall over and it snaps.
And the bit where the dog thinks it's a sausage and...you know the rest.
Here's a 9 for making me laugh!
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| Re: a comment on A Man's Best Friend. by DewDrop |
6-Jan-03/8:17 AM |
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| Re: Spider by Blade |
6-Jan-03/8:15 AM |
Spider, spider on the wall
SPLAT!
Oh...
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| Re: The Dance (Part II) by purplestain |
6-Jan-03/8:00 AM |
...'cause I'm happy just to dance with you...
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