regarding some deleted poem...	10-Jun-02/11:38 AM
I'm only a beginner I need some help here!
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Jun-02/10:35 AM
Wonderful in comment and only 3/10 ! Its about a first life where someone lays their bed and a second life where choices come home to roost as the person is cursed to repeat their language and behaviour when they need people (parallel with dementia - unable to form new memories/ behaviours)
Re: Down Lovers Lane by Mr Pig	8-Apr-03/11:22 AM
good wordplay as ever great flow A few cliches near the end 'tangerine skies' and 'moon turns to rust' doesn't seem to mean anything. I dont think the poem would lose much if you binned them. As for dandelion fairies, a perfectly fair description.
Re: Fraternity hazing the sheepdog by horus8	8-Apr-03/11:26 AM
like the lamb stood dead line perversely fun imagery excellent
Re: Unrequited Requital by OneFingerAnswer	11-Apr-03/10:30 AM
vilanelles are difficult to master this flows well No mean feat
Re: Februarys mother by INTRANSIT	11-Apr-03/10:38 AM
Nice, cant pick any faults Maybe a bit short I think a killer line might make this poem, I hope you find one
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Apr-03/7:10 AM
Nice use of contemporary language, not enough of this on poem ranker. This is a poem i can jump straight into -8-
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Apr-03/7:14 AM
'alas now i am dying beyond my means' sticks out grabs me immediately.