on Damaged By 'Weakness' by Mr Pig
10 Apr 2003, 9:19 AM
Nice. Very nice. Have a 9.
on SHE TRIES by calilegzzz
10 Apr 2003, 9:15 AM
Make it a lyric, and maybe another line or two. It doesn't seem quite finished.
on some deleted poem
11 Jan 2003, 8:56 AM
Dark Angel is built upside-down, because food goes up his arse and crap comes out his mouth.
on some deleted poem
9 Jan 2003, 4:03 PM
More art than I poem, methinks. How about entering it at the tate modern?
on Untimely Demise by marvelis
8 Jan 2003, 2:56 AM
Nice one. The final message seems sadly true. 9
on Song of Exodus by marvelis
8 Jan 2003, 2:57 AM
Also good. 9
on some deleted poem
8 Jan 2003, 3:01 AM
Very, very good. 10
on The French Shark by -=SeTTle=-
8 Jan 2003, 3:08 AM
Why don't you go, no matter how often we flush?
on Apocalypse by marvelis
8 Jan 2003, 2:55 AM
Should be a lyric, methinks. 9
on some deleted poem
7 Jan 2003, 1:48 PM
I give 5, not as it is deserved, but as it will banish this shite to obscurity.
on some deleted poem
6 Jan 2003, 12:28 PM
Another brillient poem. How do you make them? 10
on Drowning in Me by scitz
6 Jan 2003, 12:34 PM
Perhaps make it into a lyric?
on red lorry yellow lorry by deano
6 Jan 2003, 12:36 PM
It deserves 0, but I give 10 to prevent it staying around in the bottem.
on Jewel by cleverdevice
6 Jan 2003, 12:38 PM
I feel bad about squashing bugs now. (except mozzies, obviously)
on some deleted poem
6 Jan 2003, 1:48 AM
Farewell my fiend. Of all my opponents, you are the most ignoble (and unhinged). Good luck and good bye!
on Epistemology (2nd draft) by Ranger
3 Jan 2003, 4:29 PM
Nice one. Don't be put off by the 'experianced' poets. I mean, sure, they know everything about the world and if they don't like it, it's crap. Well, thats bullshit. If you like a poem, it's good for you. All that matters is, do you like it? If so, you've done a good job. And remember my motto:- ' Fuck 'em if they don't like it, 'cause they're all bastards anyway'. 10, Because I liked it. Anyone who wants to rip it to pieces, Sod off and get a life you low-life sadist piece of crap. Crawl off back to your hole and die. It's people like you that ruin life for the rest of us. Sad Fucks.
on Mannequin (draft) by Ranger
2 Jan 2003, 5:33 PM
Excellent. What were you smoking?
on if she only knew by ChunkyHunkyMonkey
2 Jan 2003, 5:50 PM
Ouch. Been there, done that, got the postcard. 9. Bah, I'm upset again now.
on some deleted poem
10 Apr 2003, 9:22 AM
Add some spacing every four lines. Also, the last 4 lines don't ryme so well. Maybe you could change them?