on Damaged By 'Weakness' by Mr Pig
10 Apr 2003, 9:19 AM
Nice. Very nice. Have a 9.
replying on SHE TRIES by calilegzzz
10 Apr 2003, 9:17 AM
On second thoughts, how about 'She's scared ans she's tired and she's mortally hurt' as a last line?
on SHE TRIES by calilegzzz
10 Apr 2003, 9:15 AM
Make it a lyric, and maybe another line or two. It doesn't seem quite finished.
replying on I Had A Little Nut Tree by Yardbird
11 Jan 2003, 6:23 AM
I've got one.
He's a turd with an attitude problem.
He's a turd with an attitude problem.
replying on Nightwalker by Another Bobjim?!?!
9 Jan 2003, 4:00 PM
So how about some serious help? Or votes.
on The French Shark by -=SeTTle=-
8 Jan 2003, 3:08 AM
Why don't you go, no matter how often we flush?
on Song of Exodus by marvelis
8 Jan 2003, 2:57 AM
Also good. 9
on Untimely Demise by marvelis
8 Jan 2003, 2:56 AM
Nice one. The final message seems sadly true. 9
on Apocalypse by marvelis
8 Jan 2003, 2:55 AM
Should be a lyric, methinks. 9
replying on Shit happens by Bobjim the II
7 Jan 2003, 1:49 AM
Or perhaps, 'It sure is'?
replying on Nightwalker by Another Bobjim?!?!
7 Jan 2003, 12:50 AM
How about a new one: 'Shitewalker'?
on Jewel by cleverdevice
6 Jan 2003, 12:38 PM
I feel bad about squashing bugs now. (except mozzies, obviously)
on red lorry yellow lorry by deano
6 Jan 2003, 12:36 PM
It deserves 0, but I give 10 to prevent it staying around in the bottem.
on Drowning in Me by scitz
6 Jan 2003, 12:34 PM
Perhaps make it into a lyric?
replying on Epistemology (2nd draft) by Ranger
5 Jan 2003, 3:50 AM
Was that an attempt to be witty?
replying on Epistemology (2nd draft) by Ranger
5 Jan 2003, 3:49 AM
zzinnia, I don't care about helpful comments. Thats great. If you think you can help thats fine. What I said was that people like D.A. and PAKI are being all high and mighty and saying it's shit without even reading it sometimes, and not leaving suggestions. The fact remains, they try to show they are great by screwing other people around.
replying on Nightwalker by Another Bobjim?!?!
5 Jan 2003, 3:39 AM
How about, 'Flatulance.'
replying on boy girl by little_angel_maria
4 Jan 2003, 1:15 PM
She is so going to kick your ass.
Nice poem Bill, but didn't really connect with me, so I won't vote on it. Listen to the suggestions and re-post it later.