on The Khat by Bachus
17 Sep 2003, 9:31 PM
yes
on When old men die by <{Baba^Yaga}>
18 Sep 2003, 5:22 AM
The rhythm flung me all over the place, but here's an 8 anyway.
on End of year poem by <~>
16 Sep 2003, 8:44 PM
Beautiful,
and sad.
~bzb
and sad.
~bzb
on Upside down and tigers by horus8
16 Sep 2003, 8:54 PM
You make me mad
with jealousy. Ten.
Ten you bastard.
Ten you olympian brain weaver.
with jealousy. Ten.
Ten you bastard.
Ten you olympian brain weaver.
on The Goodbye Hug by Amythest
9 Sep 2003, 3:29 PM
mama mia
on F.R.O.G. by Garrett S Sexton
9 Sep 2003, 3:09 PM
like a haggis to the back of my knee.
on My nails are in love with your chalkboard by Jeremi B. Handrinos
15 Sep 2003, 5:52 AM
?!
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on some deleted poem
16 Sep 2003, 10:34 PM
very nice
on Murderers in the Tropics by Fear of Garbage
21 Sep 2003, 5:56 AM
Sizzlechest
on Love in the Tropics by Fear of Garbage
21 Sep 2003, 7:50 PM
pick up the knife
and cut those ropes
and cut those ropes
on Madam Z - [<~>] - Snake Pen & Holy Grail by SupremeDreamer
22 Sep 2003, 2:59 PM
Like a headbutt from the lead singer of Insane Clown Posse.
It certainly has my attention, but I wouldn't rate it highly.
Yeshua was complex, and the only harness he wore was of humility, if the old tales can be said to have any truth to them.
Take a nice bath. Try epsom salts. Then have some ice cream. With cherry sauce.
As for those decayed lips, you might want to see a doctor.
It certainly has my attention, but I wouldn't rate it highly.
Yeshua was complex, and the only harness he wore was of humility, if the old tales can be said to have any truth to them.
Take a nice bath. Try epsom salts. Then have some ice cream. With cherry sauce.
As for those decayed lips, you might want to see a doctor.
on Ctrl freak (Alt+ version) by <~>
25 Sep 2003, 10:26 PM
Fiore dolce
on (fragment) by razorgrin
25 Sep 2003, 11:51 PM
I like the rosetta stone metaphor.
on A spectacular poem by a handsome man by <{Baba^Yaga}>
28 Sep 2003, 5:56 PM
Hilarious and somewhat bitter. Ten.
on some deleted poem
2 Oct 2003, 7:32 PM
short and lovely
mmm
mmm
on Gone missing by INTRANSIT
2 Oct 2003, 7:37 PM
first line good
second line, did you mean decent?
third line... er, oooookay... if you say so...?
second line, did you mean decent?
third line... er, oooookay... if you say so...?
on some deleted poem
2 Oct 2003, 7:51 PM
I think the poem should end with "and into the light".
the rest is a little pedagogic.
Hm. Part I is a ten. Part II and III is a seven maybe.
the rest is a little pedagogic.
Hm. Part I is a ten. Part II and III is a seven maybe.
on some deleted poem
2 Oct 2003, 7:58 PM
This poem makes my nuts swell. Watch out for tree rats.