on some deleted poem
9 Sep 2003, 2:20 PM
Long distance relationships suck, don't they?
on cold sonnet by <~>
4 Sep 2003, 3:05 PM
beauty.
on I Usually Wear Pants by razorgrin
9 Sep 2003, 9:12 AM
Ten, because I'm a horndog.
on How to sleep sitting up by Bachus
9 Sep 2003, 1:42 PM
And the champ comes out swinging, with a KO in the first minute!
on On getting back by horus8
8 Sep 2003, 10:56 PM
Bello! beautiful, man. Imagery cut apart and stacked and exploded. Assimilated and studied and polished into a shiney black metal ball, just small enough to swallow.
on some deleted poem
8 Sep 2003, 11:01 PM
"the sky a sepulcher"...
"as night pitches a canopy"
Brava.
"as night pitches a canopy"
Brava.
on All hail Discordia?(a true haiku story) by razorgrin
9 Sep 2003, 1:59 PM
Ah the days of the Principia Discordia, the Illuminatus! Trilogy, and The Book of the SubGenius. I think I read them all in one year and it blew my mind wide open.
on some deleted poem
9 Sep 2003, 2:21 PM
Have you tried writing prose instead of poetry?
on An Offering to the Deity that is Me by razorgrin
9 Sep 2003, 9:07 AM
you're making me hungry. or is that the smell of my roommeates pancakes?
on Oriental buffet on the rim of a volcano by Bachus
9 Sep 2003, 1:45 PM
It was bad clams, I tells ya. This could benefit from a punctuation mark somewhere.
on some deleted poem
9 Sep 2003, 3:06 PM
I'll give her something to write about.
And I still say you should try writing short stories.
And I still say you should try writing short stories.
on The empty room by INTRANSIT
7 Sep 2003, 7:21 PM
Changing comes to stays makes all the difference. Brava, signore! (Forget babelfish, I'm learning Italiano)
on Babelfish Poetry (II): Rendu plus Doux (Français) by Geschäftsreise
7 Sep 2003, 3:52 PM
brava!
la terra che percorriamo non siamo solidi
esso esitiamo come la memoria
la terra che percorriamo non siamo solidi
esso esitiamo come la memoria
on (untitled) by http://bandgeek
6 Sep 2003, 5:05 PM
Just what did you do?
on When Jesus Found Me by http://mulberryfairy
5 Sep 2003, 8:49 PM
Amazing. This is a brilliant brilliant piece. I love it. Ten, ten, ten! Remembre, Jesu loves you, this I know, for the Bible tells me so.
Why is Christianity labelled monotheistic if they worship a trinity?
Why is Christianity labelled monotheistic if they worship a trinity?
on some deleted poem
5 Sep 2003, 9:08 PM
Another follower of the God of Job. Thats just... ~YAWN~.
on Night walker by INTRANSIT
4 Sep 2003, 6:15 PM
Not bad at'all.
on Bury Me at Dead Man's Point by EAger to Offend
4 Sep 2003, 1:58 PM
I was shocked to see this poem. Shocked that anyone here besides me would know about Porcupine Lake, Dead Man's Point and the Great Fire.
I even posted a poem last week (now deleted) that referenced these. And to see a poem with this title...
I have often said to my old friends from South End that I want my ashes scattered at Dead Man's Point, on a night when the Northern Lights are snaking through the sky...
Aw, the memories of fishing for pike, running the trail, exploring the bush, with my Connaught Hill gang...
I even posted a poem last week (now deleted) that referenced these. And to see a poem with this title...
I have often said to my old friends from South End that I want my ashes scattered at Dead Man's Point, on a night when the Northern Lights are snaking through the sky...
Aw, the memories of fishing for pike, running the trail, exploring the bush, with my Connaught Hill gang...
on some deleted poem
4 Sep 2003, 2:29 PM
It's either complete shit or pure genius. Or somewhere in the middle. Yes, somewhere. Yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes.
No. Yes. Get me a bucket. I liked the final stanza. Certainly makes one search for hidden meanings and whatnot.
Your insect rage becomes you. Hell in a headbasket.
No. Yes. Get me a bucket. I liked the final stanza. Certainly makes one search for hidden meanings and whatnot.
Your insect rage becomes you. Hell in a headbasket.
on some deleted poem
4 Sep 2003, 6:19 PM
From whimsey to horror. Excellent.