on Laundry Day by impert&ent
25 Aug 2003, 8:57 PM
nice and crisp.
on My Show at the Whiskey a Go Go on the 26th of August 2003 by Jeremi B. Handrinos
25 Aug 2003, 7:35 PM
Good luck dude. Sock it to 'em.
on Chrystal lane swift want's me, bad. by horus8
28 Aug 2003, 3:14 PM
But I'm still put off by the use of the N-word. Don't like it.
on some deleted poem
25 Aug 2003, 9:27 PM
This one is pure self-indulgence, I think. Up on the ranker for one day only! Hurry and rank it now, before its gone... forever!
on Three Brothers by EAger to Offend
3 Sep 2003, 8:23 PM
Three brothers... hmm...
...who are you?
...who are you?
on Bury Me at Dead Man's Point by EAger to Offend
3 Sep 2003, 8:39 PM
And curse you sir, for writing a better poem. But I am currently reworking mine, and it shall resurface here...
Too many similarities... must rewrite... >:/
ten, for splitting my arrow.
Too many similarities... must rewrite... >:/
ten, for splitting my arrow.
on Burning your desert down by Jeremi B. Handrinos
30 Aug 2003, 1:45 PM
I am offended by the use of the term "tarantula holes". Remove it immediately. __________8.3
on Chrystal lane swift want's me, bad. by horus8
28 Aug 2003, 2:46 PM
I give the first half a ten, the second half a 7. That averages out to 8.5, and I'll round it up to 9.
on deleted scenes by Bill Z Bub
23 Aug 2003, 6:03 PM
Last night my room-mate punched a raccoon. Life is surreal on the edge between urban and rural.
on some deleted poem
22 Aug 2003, 9:49 AM
Okay, this one is a bit of a mess. I need to cut it into two separate poems, and rewrite rewrite rewrite.
Its all very stream of conciousness, which is good for a start. But it ain't complete.
Its all very stream of conciousness, which is good for a start. But it ain't complete.
on some deleted poem
22 Aug 2003, 10:01 AM
like a sorcerer's word.
drow.
drow.
on Aphrodite (edited) by Caducus
22 Aug 2003, 10:06 AM
"Poseidon's clams"!
For some reason, that made me laugh.
Nice try, but this doesn't work for me. Too awkward:
"what they hath doth"?
Some word choices don't fit this one.
For some reason, that made me laugh.
Nice try, but this doesn't work for me. Too awkward:
"what they hath doth"?
Some word choices don't fit this one.
on D.I.Y.M Syndrome by Rilke4ClosetLesbians
22 Aug 2003, 10:10 AM
Not normally my thing, but that was damn funny.
on The Waves by Rilke4ClosetLesbians
22 Aug 2003, 10:11 AM
but there is always distance between bodies.
always.
always.
on some deleted poem
22 Aug 2003, 10:14 AM
I'm not interested in being part of any Boy's Only club, dude.
Fuck that.
Fuck that.
on fragile by Bill Z Bub
21 Aug 2003, 8:27 PM
How odd. I try to edit this poem, and I get one of my other poems instead. WTF?
on The Angel at the arcade (this is actually an 'acne') by scitz
22 Aug 2003, 9:47 AM
sweet.
on some deleted poem
23 Aug 2003, 7:21 PM
4?
on Aphrodite (edited) by Caducus
22 Aug 2003, 11:38 AM
much better