on some deleted poem
18 Aug 2003, 4:37 PM
I like it.
on some deleted poem
30 Jul 2003, 8:28 PM
my eyes are burning
on What Have You Swallowed by Fear of Garbage
21 Aug 2003, 8:17 PM
Right in the gut.
on The makings of a killer by <{Baba^Yaga}>
17 Aug 2003, 4:11 PM
you kill me.
on some deleted poem
20 Aug 2003, 9:22 AM
Genius.
on the secret life of eyebrows by Bill Z Bub
21 Aug 2003, 7:36 PM
What the hell? Am I on crack or something?
on Camera Obscura by Fear of Garbage
21 Aug 2003, 7:46 PM
Bueno.
Excellante.
oh yeah I'm in a mood now
Excellante.
oh yeah I'm in a mood now
on fragile by Bill Z Bub
21 Aug 2003, 7:53 PM
hh. cheesey. but I am a bit cheddary, aren't I?
on some deleted poem
18 Aug 2003, 4:51 PM
not sure about this one. hm.
on Clay Man by eliastemplar
18 Aug 2003, 4:59 PM
a very pithy version of Genesis?
Very nice.
Very nice.
on some deleted poem
17 Aug 2003, 4:37 PM
needs a slight revision, but this one Rolls, baby, rolls.
Read aloud, it hops on pop.
Read aloud, it hops on pop.
on Taurus women and the pride by Shardik
29 Jul 2003, 8:10 PM
Hakuna matada. Ten.
on Taurus women and the pride by Shardik
29 Jul 2003, 8:11 PM
Hakuna matada. Ten.
on Sonnet for a Suicide by <~>
29 Jul 2003, 7:59 PM
like being slapped by a velour glove.
on some deleted poem
30 Jul 2003, 8:29 PM
Oops, you did it again.
on How it should have happened by INTRANSIT
29 Jul 2003, 7:51 PM
velour seclusion
coy body cornered
denim saddle
she fits to me easy
...9
coy body cornered
denim saddle
she fits to me easy
...9
on Wake me up before you go by INTRANSIT
27 Jul 2003, 9:49 PM
a fog job?
on Wake me up before you go by INTRANSIT
27 Jul 2003, 10:01 PM
Salty.
on some deleted poem
29 Jul 2003, 8:03 PM
good ol' kilgore