on some deleted poem
6 Jul 2003, 7:06 AM
Okay, now THIS is great stuff! Ten.
on Can you believe this piece of shit was #1? by horus8
22 Jul 2003, 11:05 PM
That's damn funny.
on some deleted poem
6 Jul 2003, 7:02 AM
"Are we there yet?"
on some deleted poem
22 Jul 2003, 10:53 PM
mercy, have mercy, good woman
It's all too much
too much for me to breathe
and feast.
My belly's fit to burst
with the volume of this verse.
The troubadours and bearers of the quill
stand helpless before your beauty, bursting
from within your center, taking your fill
of the Lord's of the realm.
My hand sieves the dirt and the swill
seeking for the silver coin
that fell
on the day I pried the iron nail from my wrist,
and fell from the skull, down into the mist.
God took a bride one day
quarter past infinity
The morningstar
led the choral host
and Chronos stood
to make a toast
I need to show my love to someone
before it goes to gray
I would crucify myself for you
on a bed of hay
Some women are so easy to love.
And some men live like statuary
without the adornment of a dove,
and now these lines are getting scary.
Goodnight
It's all too much
too much for me to breathe
and feast.
My belly's fit to burst
with the volume of this verse.
The troubadours and bearers of the quill
stand helpless before your beauty, bursting
from within your center, taking your fill
of the Lord's of the realm.
My hand sieves the dirt and the swill
seeking for the silver coin
that fell
on the day I pried the iron nail from my wrist,
and fell from the skull, down into the mist.
God took a bride one day
quarter past infinity
The morningstar
led the choral host
and Chronos stood
to make a toast
I need to show my love to someone
before it goes to gray
I would crucify myself for you
on a bed of hay
Some women are so easy to love.
And some men live like statuary
without the adornment of a dove,
and now these lines are getting scary.
Goodnight
on Killing Ben Afleck by Shardik
24 Jul 2003, 7:03 PM
Yeah, wipe that smarmy grin off his J-Lo Ass munching face. Ten.
on Memoirs of a Monk - St. Screamer by SupremeDreamer
18 Jul 2003, 10:59 AM
Whammo. Golden Calf Award!
on Border towns & the runs by horus8
16 Jul 2003, 8:37 PM
excellente.
...
but your use of words such as... the "n word" and others disturbs me greatly. I'm just a repressed politically correct canuck I guess.
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but your use of words such as... the "n word" and others disturbs me greatly. I'm just a repressed politically correct canuck I guess.
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on some deleted poem
16 Jul 2003, 10:04 AM
Chilled to perfection, like a jello shot. ? Somehow I have yet to vote on this, so I'm gonna bump it up, and bring down my own poem which is currently at #1.
Wait, let me enjoy this for a moment longer. I'm swinging straight up at the top, up where the air
is
fresh
and
clean
....yeah.
Okay here goes.
Wait, let me enjoy this for a moment longer. I'm swinging straight up at the top, up where the air
is
fresh
and
clean
....yeah.
Okay here goes.
on The Umpteenth Home by EAger to Offend
13 Jul 2003, 6:09 PM
The only critique I have for your writing is the dearth of concrete imagery. Something to bite into, the juice streaming out in molten arcs.
on Optimism, pessimism and my quarter theory by INTRANSIT
13 Jul 2003, 5:30 PM
This one's worth a quarter for certain. And I'm a cheap bastard. What the hell, here's a ten.
on A Brand New Eye by EAger to Offend
13 Jul 2003, 5:53 PM
slightly abstract, but the poets will get it
on some deleted poem
8 Jul 2003, 10:13 PM
xoxoxoxox
on Untitled #13 by david
4 Jul 2003, 7:21 PM
the story of an altarboy who wore white too long. Then one day he got gangrene and his toes rotted off, each little piggy one by one falling and collected in a basket that he keeps in the back of a cupboard. Just don't let the earwigs in. They have a knack for pinching what little memory is left.
Hmm, I see you've been around a while. But I don't think I've read any poems of yours before today. Oh here's a Ten --> 10.
Hmm, I see you've been around a while. But I don't think I've read any poems of yours before today. Oh here's a Ten --> 10.
on touch of the grass by david
4 Jul 2003, 7:08 PM
Green teeth. Exquisite.
I raise my coffee cup to you, sir. Salut!
This is what happens when I'm away from this site for a month.
I raise my coffee cup to you, sir. Salut!
This is what happens when I'm away from this site for a month.
on Death on my arm by INTRANSIT
4 Jul 2003, 7:03 PM
nice minimalist piece ** I've been away far too long ** and anarchy has descended on rancid mustard wings **
also, I'm getting published ** hooray, I am semi-semi-professional **
also, I'm getting published ** hooray, I am semi-semi-professional **
on I am talented & good looking damnit! by <{Baba^Yaga}>
4 Jul 2003, 7:13 PM
I saw an amazing movie last night.: "Frida". Ah, Salma baby, I don't know wether to salute or cry. Or both.
Hey do you ever stop writing? Didn't think so. Is okay if I tape this to my bathroom mirror and repeat it to myself every morning?
Hey do you ever stop writing? Didn't think so. Is okay if I tape this to my bathroom mirror and repeat it to myself every morning?
on some deleted poem
11 Jun 2003, 9:16 PM
~sigh~
Here's a numerical symbol of my frustrated desire.
That's all.
Here's a numerical symbol of my frustrated desire.
That's all.
on some deleted poem
8 Jul 2003, 10:08 PM
Top 5 poets? The lad's got sand. And who would the remainder be, out of curiousity?