poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Bill Z Bub (201-220) and replies

Comments byBill Z Bub, 201–220 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Gloria's stairwell circles up & down by Bachus 8 Jun 2003, 9:14 PM

he looked at the tops of his shoes
and realized he was out
of his element
really

but what the hell
these bastards are
mad brilliant beautiful

mayhaps they'll rub off
on me.

get it?
replying on sharkmouth by Bill Z Bub 7 Jun 2003, 8:01 PM
You've convinced me that I'm you. But I don't believe that "you" exist. Therefore "I" do not exist. There is only darkshark. Darkshark the Devouring Devilgod at the center of the universe. And the Elder Gods play their sickening bagged-pipes...
replying on sharkmouth by Bill Z Bub 6 Jun 2003, 8:32 PM
When I was ten years old, or so, I had an extra tooth grow
in behind one of my front teeth. I don't remember exactly how
they fixed it, but I had braces for quite a while,
and even now I wear a jagged smile.
Inside my cheek, there are scars still,
from the metal wires that were careless cut,
where only I can find them, and taste the stainless steel
with the bitter blade of my tongue.
replying on Abortion by horus8 6 Jun 2003, 8:00 PM
AHA! I have you now, "Professor" Soderstrom! One cannot BUY toast, one must MAKE it! Thus I deduce that under the silken veil we shall find-
GOOD LORD! I am faint
on Bad habits & tramps by horus8 6 Jun 2003, 7:27 PM
Woe! All is lost! The Wicked One hath been Un-Harnessed!
on Stopped by zzinnia66 6 Jun 2003, 5:14 PM
mind if i slide into this clique and dish up a scoopful of panegyrics?
on Bad habits & tramps by horus8 6 Jun 2003, 5:00 PM
ya, I can see it. I can smell it. I can dig it.
on A Perfectly Reasonable Question by baughworm 6 Jun 2003, 4:51 PM
Col. Mustard in the Bedroom with the Wank Harness.
on Watching Time Slip Away by kassanna 6 Jun 2003, 4:48 PM
too

many

spaces

can't

read

properly

must

stop
on Triolet, for Jason by beakism 6 Jun 2003, 4:42 PM
solid.
on Break Down by Jeremi B. Handrinos 6 Jun 2003, 4:31 PM
Great! Where's the mp3?
on The Truth of Death by Schizophrenic 6 Jun 2003, 3:39 PM
This is nothing NOTHING before the sheer blood-chilling TERROR of GHOST IN A JAR!

http://cgi.ebay.com/ws/eBayISAPI.dll?ViewItem&item=2931457201
The second-last line: "Since your love will never keep warm."
Should there be a word in between keep and warm? Such as "me" or "you"?
replying on sharkmouth by Bill Z Bub 5 Jun 2003, 5:55 PM
Yeaaah, now if I can just convince Horus8 to record it...

As for the splaining, I'll remove it eventually.
replying on sharkmouth by Bill Z Bub 5 Jun 2003, 5:52 PM
But thats because you are an god of drunkeness and poetry.
on A Moment In Nowhere by Mr Pig 5 Jun 2003, 11:11 AM
I don't know why, but I don't care for this one much. Just the way things are sometimes.
on Carpet threading the sky by INTRANSIT 5 Jun 2003, 11:08 AM
First half excellent. Second half confusing. Then again, I'm the idiot that wrote "soothing blisters of synthesis
walk on alkaline locks", so I have no right to say such things! I must be punished.
The title is a ten. I give the body seven. That averages out to 8.5!

Rock on.

on suppose (a warm sun) by richa 5 Jun 2003, 10:49 AM
Wonderful, spare,
lilting, tilting,
abrubt and

nine,
replying on sharkmouth by Bill Z Bub 5 Jun 2003, 10:41 AM
Thank you oh lord of the sun-wine realm, oh avatar of a new aeon, oh stalker, oh warrior, oh sorcerer.
replying on Her Galactic Boudoir, his make-work by Bachus 5 Jun 2003, 10:32 AM
armadillo ecstasy?