on Night walker by INTRANSIT
4 Sep 2003, 6:15 PM
Not bad at'all.
on cold sonnet by <~>
4 Sep 2003, 3:05 PM
beauty.
on Bury Me at Dead Man's Point by EAger to Offend
4 Sep 2003, 1:58 PM
I was shocked to see this poem. Shocked that anyone here besides me would know about Porcupine Lake, Dead Man's Point and the Great Fire.
I even posted a poem last week (now deleted) that referenced these. And to see a poem with this title...
I have often said to my old friends from South End that I want my ashes scattered at Dead Man's Point, on a night when the Northern Lights are snaking through the sky...
Aw, the memories of fishing for pike, running the trail, exploring the bush, with my Connaught Hill gang...
I even posted a poem last week (now deleted) that referenced these. And to see a poem with this title...
I have often said to my old friends from South End that I want my ashes scattered at Dead Man's Point, on a night when the Northern Lights are snaking through the sky...
Aw, the memories of fishing for pike, running the trail, exploring the bush, with my Connaught Hill gang...
on Bury Me at Dead Man's Point by EAger to Offend
3 Sep 2003, 8:39 PM
And curse you sir, for writing a better poem. But I am currently reworking mine, and it shall resurface here...
Too many similarities... must rewrite... >:/
ten, for splitting my arrow.
Too many similarities... must rewrite... >:/
ten, for splitting my arrow.
on Three Brothers by EAger to Offend
3 Sep 2003, 8:23 PM
Three brothers... hmm...
...who are you?
...who are you?
on Burning your desert down by Jeremi B. Handrinos
30 Aug 2003, 1:45 PM
I am offended by the use of the term "tarantula holes". Remove it immediately. __________8.3
replying on sharkmouth by Bill Z Bub
29 Aug 2003, 6:33 PM
Come back to us, god'swife! Come back, come back...
replying on Chrystal lane swift want's me, bad. by horus8
29 Aug 2003, 4:36 PM
It's not the word itself, it's the hateful and purposefully denigrating way you use it. Not to mention the racist ranting. Yeah, its all a part of the artistic statement that IS Horus8, but its so full of H8. I don't get shocked at a whole lot, but this is purposeful and extended cruelty.
I don't use the word, not because it's not allowed, but because I would be furious if someone started calling me the equivalent.
But you live on a whole other level. You really live poetry. In comparison, I am a mere dabbler.
And tell SupineDreamer or Y3KScamPoet to quit stepping on your coat-tails. Yeah, go ahead and join a neo-nazi group as an anti-PC statement. I'm sure you'll have a real nice life.
And I call myself Bill Z. Bub for religous reasons. Or anti-religous reasons.
I don't use the word, not because it's not allowed, but because I would be furious if someone started calling me the equivalent.
But you live on a whole other level. You really live poetry. In comparison, I am a mere dabbler.
And tell SupineDreamer or Y3KScamPoet to quit stepping on your coat-tails. Yeah, go ahead and join a neo-nazi group as an anti-PC statement. I'm sure you'll have a real nice life.
And I call myself Bill Z. Bub for religous reasons. Or anti-religous reasons.
on Chrystal lane swift want's me, bad. by horus8
28 Aug 2003, 3:14 PM
But I'm still put off by the use of the N-word. Don't like it.
on Chrystal lane swift want's me, bad. by horus8
28 Aug 2003, 2:46 PM
I give the first half a ten, the second half a 7. That averages out to 8.5, and I'll round it up to 9.
on Laundry Day by impert&ent
25 Aug 2003, 8:57 PM
nice and crisp.
on My Show at the Whiskey a Go Go on the 26th of August 2003 by Jeremi B. Handrinos
25 Aug 2003, 7:35 PM
Good luck dude. Sock it to 'em.
on deleted scenes by Bill Z Bub
23 Aug 2003, 6:03 PM
Last night my room-mate punched a raccoon. Life is surreal on the edge between urban and rural.
replying on deleted scenes by Bill Z Bub
23 Aug 2003, 5:48 PM
Just tell me what I gotta do, my friend.
replying on fragile by Bill Z Bub
22 Aug 2003, 8:35 PM
nevermind, it works now.
replying on D.I.Y.M Syndrome by Rilke4ClosetLesbians
22 Aug 2003, 11:42 AM
more like
:O
;)
:O
;)
on Aphrodite (edited) by Caducus
22 Aug 2003, 11:38 AM
much better
on The Waves by Rilke4ClosetLesbians
22 Aug 2003, 10:11 AM
but there is always distance between bodies.
always.
always.
Why is Christianity labelled monotheistic if they worship a trinity?