poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Bill Z Bub (141-160) and replies

Comments byBill Z Bub, 141–160 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on D.I.Y.M Syndrome by Rilke4ClosetLesbians 22 Aug 2003, 10:10 AM
Not normally my thing, but that was damn funny.
on Aphrodite (edited) by Caducus 22 Aug 2003, 10:06 AM
"Poseidon's clams"!
For some reason, that made me laugh.

Nice try, but this doesn't work for me. Too awkward:
"what they hath doth"?
Some word choices don't fit this one.

on fragile by Bill Z Bub 21 Aug 2003, 8:27 PM
How odd. I try to edit this poem, and I get one of my other poems instead. WTF?
on What Have You Swallowed by Fear of Garbage 21 Aug 2003, 8:17 PM
Right in the gut.
replying on A Surgeons Butchery by SupremeDreamer 21 Aug 2003, 7:57 PM
Once again you extract the pit from the peach. I was just going to say "hruhn?"
on fragile by Bill Z Bub 21 Aug 2003, 7:53 PM
hh. cheesey. but I am a bit cheddary, aren't I?
on Camera Obscura by Fear of Garbage 21 Aug 2003, 7:46 PM
Bueno.
Excellante.

oh yeah I'm in a mood now
on the secret life of eyebrows by Bill Z Bub 21 Aug 2003, 7:36 PM
What the hell? Am I on crack or something?
replying on deleted scenes by Bill Z Bub 20 Aug 2003, 9:20 AM
I seeeeeeee you!
on Clay Man by eliastemplar 18 Aug 2003, 4:59 PM
a very pithy version of Genesis?
Very nice.
replying on deleted scenes by Bill Z Bub 18 Aug 2003, 4:31 PM
you are very perceptive. And may I say, you have a beautiful ~.
replying on hermetic by Bill Z Bub 18 Aug 2003, 4:22 PM
What? No, that would be incredibly trite. I would never do that. Really. No, seriously.
replying on the secret life of eyebrows by Bill Z Bub 17 Aug 2003, 8:36 PM
Aww, thanks! Now I feel special. :))
on The makings of a killer by <{Baba^Yaga}> 17 Aug 2003, 4:11 PM
you kill me.
replying on null by Bill Z Bub 17 Aug 2003, 2:55 PM
thanks.

nothing new to see here, I just changed July to June.
on Taurus women and the pride by Shardik 29 Jul 2003, 8:11 PM
Hakuna matada. Ten.
on Taurus women and the pride by Shardik 29 Jul 2003, 8:10 PM
Hakuna matada. Ten.
on Sonnet for a Suicide by <~> 29 Jul 2003, 7:59 PM
like being slapped by a velour glove.
on How it should have happened by INTRANSIT 29 Jul 2003, 7:51 PM
velour seclusion
coy body cornered
denim saddle
she fits to me easy
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