poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Bill Z Bub (161-180) and replies

Comments byBill Z Bub, 161–180 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Wake me up before you go by INTRANSIT 27 Jul 2003, 10:01 PM
Salty.
on Choices by INTRANSIT 27 Jul 2003, 9:51 PM
Reminds me of last night, only without the floozies. Or the crew. Or the brewskis. Got the bruises though.
on Wake me up before you go by INTRANSIT 27 Jul 2003, 9:49 PM
a fog job?
replying on Do Swans Get Jealous? (#2) by Christof 24 Jul 2003, 7:17 PM
Null? How'd you do that?
on Killing Ben Afleck by Shardik 24 Jul 2003, 7:03 PM
Yeah, wipe that smarmy grin off his J-Lo Ass munching face. Ten.
That's damn funny.
replying on null by Bill Z Bub 22 Jul 2003, 6:44 PM
Because writing it gave me a big fat zit on my forehead?
replying on null by Bill Z Bub 22 Jul 2003, 6:43 PM
Does it matter? As it reads, would you say it was July's sister?
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The names have been changed to protect the innocent and/or guilty.
replying on a poet in the city by Bill Z Bub 20 Jul 2003, 10:20 PM
Story is all.
Golden waves in the Fall.
Dark sugar, thick and sticky
sweet like yesterday,
I just need to get laid.
That is all.
on Landmine by Bachus 20 Jul 2003, 9:58 PM
yeah then you'd need an artificial head
replying on far but close by KagatoSan 20 Jul 2003, 9:55 PM
I want to steal those last three lines...
like a pie
steaming in a window
ready to get fingered

ym.

though she really is also like the sky,
an alibi,
or a drive-by.

cut me down
in a hail of mary's
replying on rainday by Bill Z Bub 20 Jul 2003, 9:48 PM
thank you!
on Memoirs of a Monk - St. Screamer by SupremeDreamer 18 Jul 2003, 10:59 AM
Whammo. Golden Calf Award!
replying on rainday by Bill Z Bub 18 Jul 2003, 10:52 AM
Thanks richa. Bloombrellas is my favorite too.
replying on rainday by Bill Z Bub 18 Jul 2003, 10:51 AM
Yes, big numbers.
So where the hell are you now?
replying on Border towns & the runs by horus8 17 Jul 2003, 9:34 AM
I wasn't talking about this poem in particular.
on Border towns & the runs by horus8 16 Jul 2003, 8:37 PM
excellente.
...
but your use of words such as... the "n word" and others disturbs me greatly. I'm just a repressed politically correct canuck I guess.
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replying on rainday by Bill Z Bub 16 Jul 2003, 11:10 AM
Thankye olde crone!
replying on rainday by Bill Z Bub 16 Jul 2003, 11:09 AM
Yes, it's the key to the gates of paradise.
replying on rainday by Bill Z Bub 16 Jul 2003, 9:55 AM
Dammit you are hard to please woman! :\