on Bumming kiddies by Bobjim
9 Apr 2003, 8:08 AM
dear me. im not going to give this a ten the novalty has worn off slightly -9-!
on Frozen Angel by Ranger
5 Apr 2003, 8:52 AM
i like this one best. who is bobjim btw? do we know him at college?
on Sublime Street Morals by thepinkbunnyofdoom
5 Apr 2003, 12:45 PM
yeah it seems personal. i like it a lot. my love poems were depressing me so ive tryed to broaden my spectrum (but they all think theyre crap - oh well back to the unrequited love)
on Spring Rolls by Ranger
5 Apr 2003, 8:37 AM
Ive seen this one before too. it doesnt really speak to me im afraid
on Sublime Street Morals by thepinkbunnyofdoom
5 Apr 2003, 9:22 AM
This is really good - did you make it all up yourself? (not that im doubting your abilities)
on Award acceptance speach by Bobjim
9 Apr 2003, 8:06 AM
Ha! rather good
on His Dying Words (2nd draft) by Ranger
5 Apr 2003, 8:32 AM
very good! 8
on I love kiddies by Bobjim
9 Apr 2003, 8:09 AM
are you really a paedophile? it explains alot
on Life's Loves Lost by Jigg
5 Apr 2003, 1:15 PM
Really good i know what you mean completly -9-
on Day to Day by thepinkbunnyofdoom
2 Apr 2003, 1:26 PM
Bit strange, at least your work is varied!
on Beauty, sleeping by Ranger
5 Apr 2003, 8:36 AM
I have commented on lots of your poems that were similar to these but i see you like to reedit quite a lot and i forget what they were like in the first place! but this is funny and seriously random which is alwayys a good thing! X
on Epistemology (2nd draft) by Ranger
5 Apr 2003, 8:49 AM
Yourr poems are too good for me to understand im afraid im not into all this gramatically correct rhythem stuff - all your stuff is good and very well written you would find them in a book of poetry which is why i dont relate to them! X 8 tho
on YOU ARE ALL WANKERS! by Bobjim
9 Apr 2003, 8:14 AM
yes but the orange awards are only for plaugurism so its not that hard (to get one)
on FIRETRUCK by Garrett S Sexton
9 Apr 2003, 7:59 AM
I dont get it
on STAR WARS by Garrett S Sexton
9 Apr 2003, 7:57 AM
Star wars is shite. sorry but its true
on Disgusting Stickmen by Bobjim
9 Apr 2003, 9:40 AM
this is good! hardly porn though
on Fate by Dostoyevsky
5 Apr 2003, 9:19 AM
Whos it about?