on Heart Made of Glass by thepinkbunnyofdoom
23 Mar 2003, 3:34 AM
well i like this poem - bit cliched (cant spell) but thats poetry for you - its nice to read someones poetry who seems to have the same problems as me but worse! ;o)
on oh it hurt so much by w~* ATHENA *~w
2 Apr 2003, 12:58 PM
trayburn
on Night And Day by MuDvAyNe
16 Mar 2003, 2:05 PM
hahahaha i dont gettit oh well 10 since i give all ur work 10 coz its good
on some deleted poem
13 Feb 2003, 2:38 PM
it made me cry. very hard to do. well done it puts everything into perspective.
on Fate by Dostoyevsky
16 Mar 2003, 1:54 PM
bit random stamp deary - its all a bit hopeless nowadays huh?
on some deleted poem
2 Apr 2003, 12:53 PM
Well actually the arrows point is rather blurred
on some deleted poem
2 Apr 2003, 1:01 PM
great! as usual
on some deleted poem
2 Apr 2003, 1:08 PM
BASTERD!
on We The People by thepinkbunnyofdoom
2 Apr 2003, 1:23 PM
Nice
on Who am I? by thepinkbunnyofdoom
23 Mar 2003, 3:30 AM
Does anyone ever understand anything Daniella says? on the fourth line from the end do you mean hallow or shallow? Its often best not to wonder who-am-i because the answer always seems to be i-am-nothing!
on Thanks For The Brain Damage by thepinkbunnyofdoom
23 Mar 2003, 3:24 AM
yeah i know what u mean - well metaphorically anyway. Its the way some people can make u feel they often dont realise they are doing it or they do it on purpose because they want to hurt you and it works
on some deleted poem
16 Mar 2003, 2:12 PM
are u male or female? ornella sez ur female! good poem nice structure
on some deleted poem
16 Mar 2003, 2:23 PM
i dont know what to say! well written?!
on Blinded by Dostoyevsky
13 Mar 2003, 2:20 PM
yay wonderfully good i love it
on Hidden Meaning by thepinkbunnyofdoom
23 Mar 2003, 3:41 AM
Bit diffferent to ur other stuff - wow metaphors and everything- you will become a poet yet oh PBofD! 9
on Ment to be confusing by thepinkbunnyofdoom
23 Mar 2003, 3:37 AM
Also good - i think your work is very interesting, parts are brilliant, parts shite but definatly lots of potential, makes me feel sad to read them so god knows how u feel
on some deleted poem
2 Apr 2003, 12:49 PM
HAHAHAHA WOW HOW DO YOU REMEMBER ALL THESE TONY BLAIR SPEECHES? such a good idea - but what else can you do before bordom sets in?
on some deleted poem
2 Apr 2003, 12:51 PM
Same i can make out something about love. good try
on Past by Dostoyevsky
11 Mar 2003, 1:46 PM
heres a grade coz u have none yet- why dont u re do blinded also- it is one of my favorite poems u know!