replying on Xmas gifts list by lunar
19 Dec 2002, 2:10 PM
well the sand isnt clean is it? i have been there yes but it was bout 10 years ago. it is the only dessert i have been to annd i didnt stay long as i was on one of those see-it-all trips.
replying on Xmas gifts list by lunar
19 Dec 2002, 2:08 PM
True i know nothing. have fun with the nakedness and the volleyball
replying on Xmas gifts list by lunar
19 Dec 2002, 2:01 PM
Im sorry America is an amazing place i had never been somewhere where you can look in all directions and all you could see was dirty sand and where its so hot its almost unbearable - i try to give metaphors but obviously they are nit entirely accurate, i hoped u had not been to D.V so then all you have had was its steriotype.
replying on Xmas gifts list by lunar
19 Dec 2002, 1:54 PM
ok ok ive got to love anyone who wears tweeds! im only teasing him anyway, plus naked volley ball sounds great but one shouldnt say they play it if they dont!
replying on Xmas gifts list by lunar
19 Dec 2002, 1:42 PM
yes ive been there of course it seemed quite vast and empty, boiling hot with a lifeless lake in the middle. But you are right it was incredible to look at, but you must agree it is empty relative to the amount of objects/people in it.
replying on Xmas gifts list by lunar
19 Dec 2002, 1:39 PM
Dont insult me then say 'sorry' for then there was no point in the insult. Of course you are going to think your poems are fine since you wrote them. My poem has merit to myself and if it means something to me surely that makes it valid enough to post.
on Caged World by deep-as-a-puddle
19 Dec 2002, 1:29 PM
i like this a lot better than your other one coz of its randomness! some of the lines are very well written too. I dont really understand it tho! xx
on Misplaced admoration by deep-as-a-puddle
19 Dec 2002, 1:27 PM
This doesnt really make sense, plus it does seem you have changed to make it rhyme but i do quite like it but its not really the type of poem i relate to! xx
replying on Xmas gifts list by lunar
19 Dec 2002, 1:24 PM
people do not like you because you are evil but surely it is the quality of your poems that matters mostly comparative to what mark they give you.
you cannot go round with the dillusion that people give you bad marks because they do not like you, maybe it is the quality of your poems that induces the bad marks?
you cannot go round with the dillusion that people give you bad marks because they do not like you, maybe it is the quality of your poems that induces the bad marks?
replying on Xmas gifts list by lunar
19 Dec 2002, 1:20 PM
Ahh poetandknowit may have a clever name but his mind is as empty as Death Valley.
It depends on the type of love also-it is not the love that brings suffering but when the love goes wrong normally.
It depends on the type of love also-it is not the love that brings suffering but when the love goes wrong normally.
replying on Xmas gifts list by lunar
19 Dec 2002, 1:17 PM
well thanks Gods wife for the help and mr/s poetandknowit will have to wait and see for my next poem and see what you think if that keeping in mind that none of your poems have all got 10s so it is not as though u are the most perfect poem writer.
replying on Xmas gifts list by lunar
12 Dec 2002, 1:33 PM
well at least some people are giving constructive critism instead of saying 'its crap' which is completly no help at all
replying on Xmas gifts list by lunar
11 Dec 2002, 2:15 PM
thanks well it is only an early poem i dont really know much about structure-my poems reflect my thoughts!
replying on Gilded Stumps of Olde (AN STORY THAT IS NOT AN POEME) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
11 Dec 2002, 2:11 PM
well to be honest i didnt read it all coz i dont have the time but it seems to be one of ur better ones coz it hasnt offended too many people
replying on Bacchus and the Ivy by <{Baba^Yaga}>
11 Dec 2002, 2:08 PM
that is certainly a lovely visual way of putting it
replying on The North Wind by Ranger
11 Dec 2002, 2:04 PM
im kat at alton. im the one stamp says stalks tom
replying on Xmas gifts list by lunar
11 Dec 2002, 1:51 PM
oh and you are so knowledgable on this subject. if he likes it, he likes it.
replying on Xmas gifts list by lunar
10 Dec 2002, 2:05 PM
Did u give me the 0 0r 9? i think ur work is much more accomplished than mine though. glad i have someone on my wavelength tho!
on The yellow rose of California by INTRANSIT
10 Dec 2002, 2:02 PM
you are a lot more peotry literate than me. yr poems sound like they are meant to be poems unlike mine which are just random thoughts