on some deleted poem
15 Jan 2003, 10:00 AM
The first one doesn't scan too well. I am, however all in favour of dirty limericks. look, i just wrote more!
on some deleted poem
14 Jan 2003, 1:43 PM
viva boots.
on some deleted poem
15 Jan 2003, 6:26 AM
damn.that's one of the best you've written.
on the midget of humiliation by Bill Z Bub
16 Jan 2003, 11:03 AM
I like the midget. keep him. and the rest too.
on some deleted poem
16 Jan 2003, 10:59 AM
We are gathered here today to lay to rest the last mortal remains of the English language. It was brutally murdered by an assailant known only as "crazybeautiful"....
"Eat 2 stay alive"? That's soooo profound!11 I thought I was eating to provide entertainment to others!
"Eat 2 stay alive"? That's soooo profound!11 I thought I was eating to provide entertainment to others!
on <{Grasping^Grendals}> by Bachus
16 Jan 2003, 1:44 PM
This is +4 rockin'. Best Grendel poems ever.
on some deleted poem
16 Jan 2003, 1:47 PM
Angsty? 'zat you? Angsty mcAngst from Zealand? if you had said so earlier, I'd have shown you my bra far sooner.
on some deleted poem
16 Jan 2003, 10:50 AM
You got used because you're a foolish little girl whose definition of love means he takes you out to McDonald's and if he supersizes your fries, you'll swallow.Learn to spell, you illiterate dunce. Your rhyme schemes are extremely childish and the subject has been done to death and back. PUT DOWN THE BASEBALL BAT AND BACK AWAY FROM THE DEAD HORSE IMMEDIATELY! god bless you. right in the ass, baby.
on some deleted poem
16 Jan 2003, 10:55 AM
Get out of the suburbs, bratling. Realize that there are people who actually suffer in this world. Acquire perspective. Acquire zeros in bright emerald flocks!
on The shirt I wore to dinner. by Jeremi B. Handrinos
15 Jan 2003, 1:26 PM
I want that shirt. I have little hairclips that say "stop reading me" that confuse people. I want some raw fish with wasabi. There are no decent sushi places within less than at least a 4 hour drive of here.
on On Wanting to Know The Truth by dougsoderstrom
15 Jan 2003, 1:16 PM
a shab-ass one, that's what kind. boo-urns!
on some deleted poem
15 Jan 2003, 1:23 PM
The "wearing only chastity" should be before the horse, i think. Godiva wasn't supposed to be seen. People were in their houses with shutters closed, etc. From the accounts I heard, the guy who did look was blinded. There you go. i think.
on some deleted poem
15 Jan 2003, 9:58 AM
The first stanza is good. The others are kind of blah. Ghost in the machine was an awful movie.
on -=Dark_Angel=- RAP by poemwanker
15 Jan 2003, 10:02 AM
no amount of hottie big-booty fly girls can save this piece of shoe-scraping.
on Beowulf (funny) by sav876
14 Jan 2003, 1:46 PM
grendelicious.
on some deleted poem
14 Jan 2003, 1:52 PM
Tintagiles, you're right on 2 of those. The kid also thought he was a werewolf. The furries are folks who feel a kinship with some type of animal and identify themselves as such. In that case, it was wolves. Then there was the fruity little gothling who thought he was a dragon. Hung around with the werewolf kid and their crew. Awful little creatures, you couldn't even slap 'em for thei stupidity because most of them claimed to be masochists because it's hip or something.
on Goldenshoes Shane by dantron
14 Jan 2003, 2:15 PM
them's some fancy-ass shoes.
on some deleted poem
14 Jan 2003, 2:16 PM
nifty. how've you been? i've missed you, mrs.g.